Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Patty,

Jenny could not stop thinking about the loss of love. She missed Ron so much. Having friends helps somewhat. Is she pregnant? Good cliffhanger. Well done my friend.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Hi Gypsy; thanks for following along - there's more to come - but, yes

~patty~

Comment from apky

Excellent

I have the feeling I've missed one or two posts on this story. I scrawled to the start to see if you had chapters on it but there are none, so I can't retrace my steps back to what I may have missed. Which is annoying, but I only have myself to blame.

Having said that, I really enjoyed this and will try to catch the next post. I think I may have been fooled by the artwork, if it is the same as the ones before and I simply skipped it.

Well done.

Aki xx

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

the rest of the book is under 'The Products of Love,' and this one will join them in a bit - I'm doing an experiment to see if you get more readers when it ISN'T part of a book,

~patty~

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, Patty, :)

The subject was dropped and they didn't talk about it...for now. Good foreshadowing! Now I can't wait to find out if she is truly pregnant.

I miss the dog stories :P

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Hi; dog stories are coming, I promise.

For now, we are concentrating on Jenny and Ron. LOL

~patty~

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I thought she got sick because of nerves...oops.
Very well written and no problems noted in the writing. Great ending to each chapter making us want more

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Hi Barb; thank you so much for reading along; more coming,

~patty~

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

She is pregnant. Why oh why did Eve eat that apple? LOL
The woman always pays and sometimes the child as well. This is a story that is played out over and over everywhere. Well done Patty. Nancy

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Hi Nancy; yes, indeed. More coming,

~patty~

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Uh oh. Sounds like Jenny's got a muffin in the oven. It's not mine. It used to be I couldn't walk past a girl without getting her pregnant. Poor Jenny. What's she to do? I guess we'll find out.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Hi Thomas; thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Jenny will come up with a plan

~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written chapter. The sudden sickness tells a story of its own. The thought of pregnancy is always the first thought, but soon the pissibility is forgotten until the nausea continues.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Hi Sandra; thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I greatly appreciate your time and lovely words,

~patty~

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Exceptional

Yes my friend this is well written so this is when your friend was soon to realise that she was pregnant must have come as a shock to her , so life changing when you rent expecting this well done again I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Hi Jill; thank you so much for the lovely review and for following along with the story,

~patty~

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This story is so sad and I feel sorry for Jenny having to deal with her lost love and then to suddenly be sick at the cafe had to be stressful for her. I am enjoying her story. Patricia

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Hi Patricia; thank you so much - more is coming,

~patty~

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

This is lovely. I do feel for Jenny, but it's nice to see that the other women are making an effort to cheer her up.
You've finished your post with a perfect cliffhanger.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Hi Maria; thank you so much for reading along; there is so much more to come,

~patty~