Dolphins play the whole day.
A free verse poem.22 total reviews
Comment from Asyraf N. Jamsari
Hi robina,
This is a very sweet piece of poem. The artwork just cant get any adorable. I like the idea and the way you expressed it. Nice flow and choice of words. All the best with the contest. Have a nice day.
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Hi robina,
This is a very sweet piece of poem. The artwork just cant get any adorable. I like the idea and the way you expressed it. Nice flow and choice of words. All the best with the contest. Have a nice day.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good week.
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Dolphins Play the Whole Day, has a light, fun style and promotes those cool Flipper-essays critters, which we all love. Question: Did the shark hit the dolphin accidentally? No, It was on 'porpoise'.
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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This free verse, Dolphins Play the Whole Day, has a light, fun style and promotes those cool Flipper-essays critters, which we all love. Question: Did the shark hit the dolphin accidentally? No, It was on 'porpoise'.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good week.
