Perennials of War
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Comment from Curly Girly
Okay, good. So now we know why this painting is so important to her...
My ancestors when through so much to make sure I had freedom and not have to live under tyranny
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she anything but fine."
she's anything but fine."
A visit to that museum would be a hard thing for a teenager. I don't think I could have done that tour at 16.
A good chapter, Barbara. The story was easy to follow and the question about the painting was answered.
Nicole
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Okay, good. So now we know why this painting is so important to her...
My ancestors when through so much to make sure I had freedom and not have to live under tyranny
Typo:
she anything but fine."
she's anything but fine."
A visit to that museum would be a hard thing for a teenager. I don't think I could have done that tour at 16.
A good chapter, Barbara. The story was easy to follow and the question about the painting was answered.
Nicole
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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I have made the correction. I've been to Dachau an it's horrible, even as an adult. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
You did a great job with this chapter. I got a kick out of Jeff and Helen's argument about whether he should check on Shana. I liked Shana's answer to the question. I can see why it upset her to speak about it. That is a heavy load for anyone to carry. She just wants to do right by her family and I can relate to that. Great work with this one. Try to relax and have fun at your mother's. We will all still be here when you get back.
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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You did a great job with this chapter. I got a kick out of Jeff and Helen's argument about whether he should check on Shana. I liked Shana's answer to the question. I can see why it upset her to speak about it. That is a heavy load for anyone to carry. She just wants to do right by her family and I can relate to that. Great work with this one. Try to relax and have fun at your mother's. We will all still be here when you get back.
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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I know you will. I am worried I might miss a Smurphgirl ramble. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
