Caught in Time
5/7/5 Butterfly Contest15 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 about butterflies, Caught In Time, has the proper set up and reminds me of that insect collection that our biology teacher made us assemble during the summer. I learned a lot.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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This 5-7-5 about butterflies, Caught In Time, has the proper set up and reminds me of that insect collection that our biology teacher made us assemble during the summer. I learned a lot.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thanks for the insightful thoughts. I personally don't like butterflies pinned to paper. Thank you for reviewing
Comment from l.raven
HI Val, this is just beautiful sweet girl...and CONGRATULAIONS on a well earned win...I love butterflies...but it seems there are less of time anymore...very nicely written Val...beautiful...love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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HI Val, this is just beautiful sweet girl...and CONGRATULAIONS on a well earned win...I love butterflies...but it seems there are less of time anymore...very nicely written Val...beautiful...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Thank you Linda Hugs
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sooooooo welcome Val...hugs back at ya...xxoo love
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think that it is outstanding and no wonder you won this in the contest. I love the way this flows it's very soft and subtle. Good content and nice imagery. Thank you so much for sharing this you are such a talented writer. God bless you. With love, Lola
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think that it is outstanding and no wonder you won this in the contest. I love the way this flows it's very soft and subtle. Good content and nice imagery. Thank you so much for sharing this you are such a talented writer. God bless you. With love, Lola
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for this beautiful review.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Val. Oh congratulations on this beauty! I really like the images your words give to me. I used to sell these butterflies in my store outta Peru. Gorgeous write and again congratulations! xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Hi Val. Oh congratulations on this beauty! I really like the images your words give to me. I used to sell these butterflies in my store outta Peru. Gorgeous write and again congratulations! xoxo deborah
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Dear.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend I liked this you just put into words what you see and you done it so beautifully good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Hello my friend I liked this you just put into words what you see and you done it so beautifully good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Jill
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Wild bu/tter/fly pinned =5
to pa/per un/der clear glass =7
Fro/zen blue beau/ty=5...............................good syllable count
the first two lines are grammatically connected, the last line is an observation. Good job.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Hello, my friend,
Wild bu/tter/fly pinned =5
to pa/per un/der clear glass =7
Fro/zen blue beau/ty=5...............................good syllable count
the first two lines are grammatically connected, the last line is an observation. Good job.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your positive comments
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a thoughtful and well written 5-7-5 about what we consider beautiful. We'd like to preserve it at any cost. Better to enjoy them while living. A good entry for the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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This is a thoughtful and well written 5-7-5 about what we consider beautiful. We'd like to preserve it at any cost. Better to enjoy them while living. A good entry for the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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I agree with your comments about letting them live. Thank you for your positive review.
Comment from jaded831
My uncle pinned butterflies, I don't know why, I would rather capture beauty in a poem. You certainly did with yours. Your words captured the beauty of the butterfly both figuratively and literally. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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My uncle pinned butterflies, I don't know why, I would rather capture beauty in a poem. You certainly did with yours. Your words captured the beauty of the butterfly both figuratively and literally. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you for this very insightful review.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Nicely done 5-7-5 butterfly poem. "pinned to paper under clear glass
Frozen blue beauty" I love it You took the simplicity of something to the extravagant.
~Kerry
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Nicely done 5-7-5 butterfly poem. "pinned to paper under clear glass
Frozen blue beauty" I love it You took the simplicity of something to the extravagant.
~Kerry
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you for "getting" my intention here.
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Your very welcome.
Comment from bmethner
Beautifully executed 5-7-5 poem that addressed the topic of the butterfly. Each line met the required syllables and flowed very well. The message did not seem forced and the art work perfectly depicted the poem.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Beautifully executed 5-7-5 poem that addressed the topic of the butterfly. Each line met the required syllables and flowed very well. The message did not seem forced and the art work perfectly depicted the poem.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review.
