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A short autobiography

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Comment from Sankey
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Good chapter, again mate. Keep them coming. I like real life stories as I think I have told you before. I am working on a new chapter of my biography re more recent times.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Always appreciate your support and comments.
Comment from patcelaw
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The plot thickens, but I like how it is coming together. I am still enthralled with this story. Many blessing Brett for a wonderful week ahead. Patricia

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Always appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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I like the title of this chapter, 'Whiskey Talking'.
Some say that one speaks the truth when they get alcohol in them.
The image shown supports the story. I wonder what kind of whiskey it was-- Jim Beam, Crown Royal or something else?
Thanks for sharing a part of your book.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from country ranch writer
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Dusty was a kind man to the boy and if he could turn his life around he was willing to try. So even if folks were against it he was all for it. Maybe it will be his day afterall

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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(") Holy...

Great POV from the other one involved in the decision. I loved the way everyone said not but in his mind it 'was his mistake to make'.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Always appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written chapter. I is said that when something or someone is always on your mind without being able to let it go. It is definitely a sign to tell you to do something about it. It is good to read about Dusty's thoughts about the boy he cannot forget.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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God works in mysterious ways his miracles to perform. Dusty has been touched by the plight of a young boy and wants to help.It is hard for his friends to understand because he has always doted on his freedom. I think help is on the way Brett. Good job. Nancy

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Always appreciate your comments and support.

    As I like to tell my readers, much more on the way so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks the effect of whiskey talking and how people would take it for a decisive action, no one cares, everyone knows Dusty West was making a mistake, but all need resolution; I liked.

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.