The Golden Rule
A Poem for children, and you, too.4 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I think you did a very good job on this Kyrielle poem for the contest. Flows
and rhymes well with good message. Image chosen is appropriate for your
words. Marilyn
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I think you did a very good job on this Kyrielle poem for the contest. Flows
and rhymes well with good message. Image chosen is appropriate for your
words. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
After reading 'The Golden Rule', I find that it is an excellent read for children of all ages. It's best to bring them up right. Adults should read this, too.
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the picture and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Kyrielle.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
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After reading 'The Golden Rule', I find that it is an excellent read for children of all ages. It's best to bring them up right. Adults should read this, too.
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the picture and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Kyrielle.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 20-Jul-2017
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your kyrielle "The Golden Rule". You chose an appropriate picture but in line two of stanzas one and two I only counted seven syllables.
You may wish to review this.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed reading your kyrielle "The Golden Rule". You chose an appropriate picture but in line two of stanzas one and two I only counted seven syllables.
You may wish to review this.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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The committee also caught this, and the corrections have been made. Thank you for your alertness and desire to help.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written children's poem. I love the rhyming scheme in this it's very soft. The flow is very smooth. Great alliteration. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love Lola
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written children's poem. I love the rhyming scheme in this it's very soft. The flow is very smooth. Great alliteration. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love Lola
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much, Lola. Your praise is very encouraging!
