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Jack and the MoJo Ball

A boy struggles with guilt.

2 total reviews 
Comment from c_lucas
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Any so-called magic
Gains it power from the owner
This is a lesson learned
Have faith in yourself.
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To have faith in oneself, there is no goal too big. Swing for the bleachers. It's a blessing to see you work again.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
    Well thank you so much. It felt good to write something again. Hope you are doing well. I don't stop here often. Life got in the way of writing.
reply by c_lucas on 13-Jul-2017
    Health issues are my main concern,
Comment from KL Williams
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This is a wonderful story with a great message. I found it captivating and easy to read. So often people put all their faith in "lucky" objects, when in reality they were perfectly capable on their own. Thank you for sharing! :)

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
    Thank you so much, KL Williams. I appreciate your review. The story literally wrote itself.