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A short autobiography

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Comment from nancy_e_davis
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So that's a weasel huh. I always wondered what they looked like. Never bothered to check. You were very fortunate to have picked that certain gentleman to weasel money out of. What a great guy. I find your story very interesting. Good job. Nancy

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from BOO ghost
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A real life story. BOO is eager as a beaver to read it. I escaped from Hermitage Hall for the second time. Hum, trying to get a picture of what this place looks like. BOO went to a catholic school so I know how strict nuns can be. Yep, I built house in Nashville and Muffresboro area for a while with my uncle. Nashville town is shaped liked a wagon wheel, the roads. Oh, because of bad rainy weather I could not work enough sometimes. yeah, I was homeless for about six months even though I had a job. I see where you come from and seen the hard times. This real story held my attention good. There is something about true stories that catch my eye and this was a good one. Thanks for sharing. Grammar looks suffice. BOO-tastic!

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Appreciate your comments and support.
reply by BOO ghost on 18-Jul-2017
    BOO-tastic!
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Brett,

I really enjoyed reading this part of your story. I'm so happy the man offered to buy you some food. He seems to be a very nice man. I hope he will become your friend who will keep helping you.

Kat

Kat

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Appreciate your comments and support.
reply by MizKat on 18-Jul-2017
    Hi Brett,

    I'm glad that you appreciate my comments and support. You are
    wonderful at writing.

    Kat
reply by MizKat on 18-Jul-2017
    Hi Brett,

    You always write such wonderful things. I am happy each time I read
    what you've written.

    Kat

Comment from patcelaw
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I am so pleased at this point that you once again were able to escape the horrible abuse at Heritage Hall. Your story now sounds as though you are about to see something wonderful happen for you. At least I hope something wonderful is about to happen. Blessings, Patricia

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Always appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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thank you for sharing this part of the story - told a bit differently - again. I like the way you've described your savior. He really did make a big difference in your life, and you were lucky to find him.

This is well written and draws the reader in.

Looking forward to reading more,

~patty~

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Always appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
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what a great story I almost didn't comment because I didn't have a six for you, That certainly deserves a six. what a story you have penned of your life. can't wait to read what is comming next

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Sankey
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Good chapter mate. Seems we might be catching up to where I came in at last. Love the picture. Looking forward to where we are headed. Keep up the good work. I sometimes wonder if your other character Cody I think he is represents yourself a bit as well.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Always appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from bmethner
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Very nice job expressing the events of your life in such a heartfelt way. Your words touched my heart as I realize how Providence intervened in your case. You being willing to write about it expands that experience. We can't help but wonder how many more children are in similar situations. It is heart wrenching. Thank you for sharing and I am glad you were able to get away from the orphanage.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from robyn corum
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Brett,

It's amazing, the people God places in our pathways. This man, a total stranger, took pity on you and invited you into his life. That's more than lucky, it's downright amazing. Thank heaven he was there for you. Neat story!

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.

    Yes, I was very fortunate, to say to least, to meet Dusty West.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written chapter. Your new found rescuer does not seem very impress with you at that moment and he would not let you play games with him as well. Maybe he see more in you while eating at McDonalds.

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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.