iSolo Baila! (Just Dance!)
A humorous rendition of the advantages of dancing17 total reviews
Comment from smileycloud
so very imaginative
I love the characters
interesting and tells an amazing story
very supportive of the weak and shy
certainly highlights the sad and mean bully in his loneliness
how encouraging this piece is
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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so very imaginative
I love the characters
interesting and tells an amazing story
very supportive of the weak and shy
certainly highlights the sad and mean bully in his loneliness
how encouraging this piece is
have a smiley day
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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I am so thankful for your continued support, very perceptive comments, and kind words. I really appreciate your generous review, you always brighten my day~
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from BOO ghost
with the style you're displaying. yep, that fits the picture. is amazing how smart animals are. This makes the poem. Then a hyena joined in,
laughing at that hater's plight;
which made the monkeys begin,
to fling feces, to his utter fright!
Well done and entertaining.
BOO is not complaining.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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with the style you're displaying. yep, that fits the picture. is amazing how smart animals are. This makes the poem. Then a hyena joined in,
laughing at that hater's plight;
which made the monkeys begin,
to fling feces, to his utter fright!
Well done and entertaining.
BOO is not complaining.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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I am so thankful for your continued support, very perceptive comments, and kind words. I really appreciate your generous review, you always brighten my day~
Blessings,
Brother Badger
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Oh, I remember you.... from the haiku club. i still not figured out my audible problems so can not hear me via team Speak. And skype is same way, I get video but audible is corrupt. Could be I need a USB headset instead of a standard one or a plug-in setting is not right. Or a virus. yaw have fun i tat club, I saw how big it has grown.
Comment from DR DIP
Badger this is a very interesting write indeed.There is a lot of cryptic stuff goin on here I feel. You definitely have a way with phrasing and combining words Badge. Well done i liked it.
dip
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Badger this is a very interesting write indeed.There is a lot of cryptic stuff goin on here I feel. You definitely have a way with phrasing and combining words Badge. Well done i liked it.
dip
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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I am so thankful for your continued support, very perceptive comments, and kind words. I really appreciate your generous review, you always brighten my day~
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Sasha
I enjoyed this very much. Yes, this is definitely how it is here in Mazatlan, all but the tossing the hater to the lion...lol Very nice work with this. You obviously had fun writing it and it was fun to read too.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed this very much. Yes, this is definitely how it is here in Mazatlan, all but the tossing the hater to the lion...lol Very nice work with this. You obviously had fun writing it and it was fun to read too.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thanks for your continued support and kind, humorous comments!3
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This was fantastic not only for the style but the lively beat and rhythm to the form. The last stanza says it all...just dance into the night. lol
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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This was fantastic not only for the style but the lively beat and rhythm to the form. The last stanza says it all...just dance into the night. lol
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank-you so much for your continued support. I really appreciate your kind reviews, and upbeat perspective.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Mustang Patty
oh -- if only. If we could dance the haters away, it would be such a lovely world, wouldn't it? I think I will take your words to heart and the next time I get a negative review, I will simply stand up and DANCE!
Thank you for sharing this well structured poem,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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oh -- if only. If we could dance the haters away, it would be such a lovely world, wouldn't it? I think I will take your words to heart and the next time I get a negative review, I will simply stand up and DANCE!
Thank you for sharing this well structured poem,
~patty~
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank-you so much for your continued support. I really appreciate your kind review.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from lyenochka
It's almost a fun story except for the hater being eaten. I do like the advice of dancing when a "hater" changes the scene. But what if there are so many haters and too few dancers? I guess we keep dancing...anyway.
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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It's almost a fun story except for the hater being eaten. I do like the advice of dancing when a "hater" changes the scene. But what if there are so many haters and too few dancers? I guess we keep dancing...anyway.
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank-you so much for your continued support. I really appreciate your kind review. I wanted to add horror to the humor, so I hope you do not mind too much, as this is fictitious, and with a warning in place . . .
Blessings,
Brother Badger
