iSolo Baila! (Just Dance!)
A humorous rendition of the advantages of dancing17 total reviews
Comment from apky
Foregin language seem to be one thing we share, Badger29.
But on to your poem. I liked the splendid way you applied in the rhymes, as well as the portrayal of the haters. And - oh joy! - I found somebody eho spelt words in a way that didn't stop me while I read. Whew, what a relief.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Foregin language seem to be one thing we share, Badger29.
But on to your poem. I liked the splendid way you applied in the rhymes, as well as the portrayal of the haters. And - oh joy! - I found somebody eho spelt words in a way that didn't stop me while I read. Whew, what a relief.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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As your wonderful review is a relief for me. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your personal and individual perspective. Always an honor and pleasure.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The Spanish love their dancing and they are so good at it too and I love your thought, dance your way out of trouble and turn your back on 'haters', love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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The Spanish love their dancing and they are so good at it too and I love your thought, dance your way out of trouble and turn your back on 'haters', love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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As your wonderful review is a relief for me. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your personal and individual perspective. Always an honor and pleasure.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. When our mood is sad or angry. Turn on the music and make a few dance moves, before you know you forgot everything that upsetvyou in the first place.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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A very well-written poem. When our mood is sad or angry. Turn on the music and make a few dance moves, before you know you forgot everything that upsetvyou in the first place.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thank-you for reading and giving an honest and insightful review. You always add that personal touch of your perspective; I am honored and remain truly yours~
Blessings,
Brother Badger < : - D ~
Comment from tfawcus
A fine tragicomedy, with the villain getting the comeuppance he deserves. I thought it was only Christians that got thrown to the lions, though, sadly, I have found as many haters among them as in any other group of people. Splendid use of slant rhymes in the earlier verses. Your transatlantic brethren spell feces with an unnecessary extra letter, faeces. Quaint, isn't it? I rather liked the way you described those marvel(l)ous mares' tail clouds, which my masters at school insisted were cirrhus, though even the Latin derivation doesn't have the redundant 'h'. American spelling is so much simpler and more logical. I'm not sure why drama, hater and outcast are in quotation marks, though I expect you have your reasons.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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A fine tragicomedy, with the villain getting the comeuppance he deserves. I thought it was only Christians that got thrown to the lions, though, sadly, I have found as many haters among them as in any other group of people. Splendid use of slant rhymes in the earlier verses. Your transatlantic brethren spell feces with an unnecessary extra letter, faeces. Quaint, isn't it? I rather liked the way you described those marvel(l)ous mares' tail clouds, which my masters at school insisted were cirrhus, though even the Latin derivation doesn't have the redundant 'h'. American spelling is so much simpler and more logical. I'm not sure why drama, hater and outcast are in quotation marks, though I expect you have your reasons.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thank-you for reading and giving an honest and insightful review. You always add that personal touch of your perspective; I am honored and remain truly yours. I really appreciate your helpful comments about the punctuation, as I can get carries away in my attempts to emphasize emphatically. You are well versed in etymology and British English~
Blessings,
Brother Badger < : - D ~
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Badger. There is just so soul satisfying about dance. It doesn't matter what starts it either. Your soul just jumps int the dance and the spirit soars. Loved it. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Hello Badger. There is just so soul satisfying about dance. It doesn't matter what starts it either. Your soul just jumps int the dance and the spirit soars. Loved it. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thank-you for reading and giving an honest and insightful review. You added that personal touch of your perspective; I am honored and remain truly yours~
Blessings,
Brother Badger < : - D ~
Comment from Janilou
Funny you should mention Spanish and dancing going together. I lived in Spain as a child for three years and the Spanish are indeed amazing dancers. It's an entertaining poem. I didn't find any nits or errors and have no suggestions for corrections.
Good advice!
Jan
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Funny you should mention Spanish and dancing going together. I lived in Spain as a child for three years and the Spanish are indeed amazing dancers. It's an entertaining poem. I didn't find any nits or errors and have no suggestions for corrections.
Good advice!
Jan
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thank-you for reading and giving an honest and insightful review. You added that personal touch of your perspective; I am honored and remain truly yours~ Thanks for sharing your memories!
Blessings,
Brother Badger < : - D ~
Comment from beizanten
Interesting first paragraph. Good second paragraph, good imaginary.
Overall a good and well written comedy and tragedy poetry. Keep up the great work
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Interesting first paragraph. Good second paragraph, good imaginary.
Overall a good and well written comedy and tragedy poetry. Keep up the great work
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thank-you for reading and giving an honest and insightful review. You added that personal touch of your perspective; I am honored and remain truly yours~
Blessings,
Brother Badger < : - D ~
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about dancing, how dancing can help living in love and rhythm, melodic and musical gay, as smile can help living happy and peaceful; I liked.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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This speaks about dancing, how dancing can help living in love and rhythm, melodic and musical gay, as smile can help living happy and peaceful; I liked.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thank-you for reading and giving an honest and insightful review. You always add that personal touch of your perspective; I am honored and remain truly yours~
Blessings,
Brother Badger < : - D ~
Comment from poetsteve15
"So, when a "hater" gives you lip,
do what you know is right:
Smile and move your hips,
and just dance off into the night!"
This kind of says it all. I myself do not like haters, I find that it is getting harder to forgive them like I know I should. I have no place in my heart for people who do not like other because they are different or from another race. I guess it will be up to us poets to chance others minds,
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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"So, when a "hater" gives you lip,
do what you know is right:
Smile and move your hips,
and just dance off into the night!"
This kind of says it all. I myself do not like haters, I find that it is getting harder to forgive them like I know I should. I have no place in my heart for people who do not like other because they are different or from another race. I guess it will be up to us poets to chance others minds,
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank-you so much for your continued support. I am pleased that liked this and
identified with and shared your personal perspective.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Bucketlist
"as you resist their friction
by the smile on your face
The "drama "their addiction,
Will put them in their place!"
Hmmm, I know exactly who I have in mind! I love this verse, it's an alternative to arguing/fighting. Your poem had me puzzled by its description for dealing with a hater. Then I realized your " think outside the box" creative approach was actually brilliant.
Virtual hug.
Trisha
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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"as you resist their friction
by the smile on your face
The "drama "their addiction,
Will put them in their place!"
Hmmm, I know exactly who I have in mind! I love this verse, it's an alternative to arguing/fighting. Your poem had me puzzled by its description for dealing with a hater. Then I realized your " think outside the box" creative approach was actually brilliant.
Virtual hug.
Trisha
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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I am so thankful for your continued support, very perceptive comments, and kind words. I really appreciate your generous review, you always brighten my day~
Blessings,
Brother Badger
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That's a huge compliment! You are welcome BB
