Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Patty, this is beautifully written and presented. I like the double reverse etheree. Blessings for a wonderful day. I hope your weather is not too uncomfortably hot and muggy. Patricia

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Hi there; our weather is actually cool for a bit. We are only in the high 70s. I hope you are able to keep cool.

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,

~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written double reverse Etheree. When two people fall in live everything seems to be just what they wished for. The love goes sour quickly when there is nothing else that connects them.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Hi Sandra; thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement. Yes, the path of love is strewn with thorns,

~patty~

Comment from KL Williams

Excellent

I just love this poem! I thought the form was really creative. The colors and photo work really well together, and unfortunately there's a lot of truth to your words. Love is really hard work, and can so easily turn to hate. Great job, and thank you for sharing! :)

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 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

I thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,

~patty~

Comment from Auto-Manic

Excellent

Howdy Mustang. not a poet, but got the gist of what was going on. Love good at the beginning turns bad somewhere down the line, to really bad. Seems like a common theme.

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 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Hi there; I don't consider myself a poet by any means, but I do like to experiment with the different poetic forms. I'm glad you were able to get the gist of this poem. Thank you for stopping by to read and review,

~patty~

Comment from country ranch writer

Exceptional

Sometimes love is not enough it can go so wrong when we least expect it and the we must pick up the pieces of a failed love and continue on and find a new beginning

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

thank you so much for this wonderful review. I'm glad the message I was trying to convey came shining through for you.

I appreciate your kind words,

~patty~

reply by country ranch writer on 11-Jul-2017

Smiles