Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Patty, this is a great Etheree, and you've done very well. More often than not that is the cycles of love. Why do we embark on the whole process again once burnt? That's a question I sometimes ask myself. I liked it a lot and it made me think. All best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

thank you so much for a lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from brooke harrison

Excellent

hi mustangpatty1029,

i absolutely love this poem! your words flow beautifully and the contrast is spectacular.

it really pulled at my heart strings.

keep up the good work!

all the best - brooke

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi brooke; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem; it was a fun piece to write,

~patty~

Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Dear patty, Wonderful double reversed etheree! Good contrast of love and hate. Etheree poems always make me read the lines slowly - I like counting the syllables and the thoughts of the writer make me think deeply about what the poet is conveying. Dove

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for the lovely review of this poem,

~patty~

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This double, reversed Etheree, Good Love Gone Wrong, has he format correctly established. It then lives out the title in the building of a relationship in the ironically descending poetic format. This followed by the loss of a love as the words broaden to the end of both. Neat.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi Bill; thank you so much for your lovely and encouraging review. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece,

~patty~

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello my friend this is well written and as they say there is a fine line between love and hate well done this reads very smoothly well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi Jill; thank you so much for reviewing this poem. It was a fun piece to write,

~patty~

Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

Very comprehensible writing which fulfills the topic as requested. A good love turned bad. You have worded it very well and clear.
Good combination of your poem and the artwork chosen to enhance the messae of the poem: the heart is put on ice.

Well don!

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi Sarah; thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and presentation,

~patty~

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Your etheree poem works really well - starting
with romance and love, only to part and feel
the pain and sorrow - never to meet again.

Well penned, Patty.

Margaret

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi again, Margaret; I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I had a great time structuring the double reversed etheree and trying to make it have meaning.

~patty~

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Some things are much more easily said than ever accomplished. Trying to forget someone who once rang your chimes can be as difficult to forget as that bump inside your mouth that you know you should ignore but your tongue keeps finding it time after time. I am not familiar with this type of poem, but I enjoyed it anyway.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I do agree with you in your remarks - the etheree is one of those poetic forms that pops up every once in awhile on FanStory.

~patty~

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Patty, :)

I like this style poem. It looks like a mirror -- cool reflections. I definitely liked the first one about 'love'. Hate is harder to feel, I think.

I hope you are fine.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi there; thank you for asking - I am doing great right now. I do appreciate your time to read and review this poem,

~patty~

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Patty, a perfect double Etheree telling a good story of love gone wrong. Well expressed in a telling manner and very convincing in content. The two forms blend well and it all makes good sense. Well written and a good picture of a 'sinking' heart. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi Dorothy; thank you so much for this lovely review. I'm glad my poem and the presentation were enjoyable to you,

~patty~