Before It's Over
Sonnet contest entry18 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
I wouldn't dream of downsizing your rating based purely on my own religious convictions, Anonymous Sonneteer. Nor should anyone do anything even remotely like it for anything they might right but disagree with.
We each have an inherent right to freedom of speech, and that includes voicing our own religious beliefs...for now. But times; they are a' changing so let's do so while we still can...
Your sonnet is very well composed, in excellent iambic pentameter. Thus far, it is the only sonnet I've read in this contest that has used a proper sonnet format.
I haven't the slightest clue what form the other entries in this contest are written in. It's no form of sonnet I've ever read before.
Having said that, perhaps someone will rise to the challenge and provide you with some decent competition.
However, this will be quite difficult to top.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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I wouldn't dream of downsizing your rating based purely on my own religious convictions, Anonymous Sonneteer. Nor should anyone do anything even remotely like it for anything they might right but disagree with.
We each have an inherent right to freedom of speech, and that includes voicing our own religious beliefs...for now. But times; they are a' changing so let's do so while we still can...
Your sonnet is very well composed, in excellent iambic pentameter. Thus far, it is the only sonnet I've read in this contest that has used a proper sonnet format.
I haven't the slightest clue what form the other entries in this contest are written in. It's no form of sonnet I've ever read before.
Having said that, perhaps someone will rise to the challenge and provide you with some decent competition.
However, this will be quite difficult to top.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for this fantastic review, Dean. It does seem a few entries are a little off meter there, lol. I'm glad you liked the piece. I really appreciate the generous stars. Have a great night.
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You're very welcome and you do the same.
Comment from Eternal Muse
I was struck in the heart by the sheer beauty of this sonnet. Absolutely after my own heart. Perfection. Depth, feather-light and smooth meter, philosophy, and - poetry at its best.
An absolute delight. I don't know who you are, but I will find out! when the contest is over.
Bravo!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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I was struck in the heart by the sheer beauty of this sonnet. Absolutely after my own heart. Perfection. Depth, feather-light and smooth meter, philosophy, and - poetry at its best.
An absolute delight. I don't know who you are, but I will find out! when the contest is over.
Bravo!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Wow, thank you so much for the kind words and the big sixer, ytb. Once you find out who I am you'll have to check out some of my other works. I'm a big sonnet fan. I love the sonnet the most out of all the forms. I'm sure you'll like a couple. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. Thank you again. Have a great day.
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This sonnet has chiseled perfection not many can master here. I know about 10 people who can do this, but haven't have you figured out yet.
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I haven't been doing much on here lately. Just bought a new house that needs a lot of work and it's just been too hectic lately. Yes, I think the sonnet can be nothing less than a perfect work of art. I'm a stickler for that, lol.
Comment from Drew Delaney
Excellent sonnet. Rhyming is right on and rhythm as well. Sad theme but the truth. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. A blessing to read such amazing poetry. Drew
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Excellent sonnet. Rhyming is right on and rhythm as well. Sad theme but the truth. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. A blessing to read such amazing poetry. Drew
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and big sixer, Drew. Yes, it doesn't look like a happy ending and there's so many who aren't prepared. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating, Drew. Thank you again.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Writing about bunnies and rainbows does not soothe the soul. Your words are wonderfully woven to tell the tale of what will happen when the trumpet calls us. Is the end coming soon? Has God had enough? Only time will tell.
Your piece is well crafted and has a much deeper meaning than simply a belief in God. It is a call to start loving our neighbors - regardless of what you believe. It is only love that will save us from the oncoming destruction,
~patty~
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Writing about bunnies and rainbows does not soothe the soul. Your words are wonderfully woven to tell the tale of what will happen when the trumpet calls us. Is the end coming soon? Has God had enough? Only time will tell.
Your piece is well crafted and has a much deeper meaning than simply a belief in God. It is a call to start loving our neighbors - regardless of what you believe. It is only love that will save us from the oncoming destruction,
~patty~
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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That is so true, Patty. Thank you for the excellent review and the kind words. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written sonnet. We all have good and evil within us that stands against each other all the time. No one is only good only evil. Most if us fight the evil and try to be good while others suppress the good or just ignore it.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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A very well-written sonnet. We all have good and evil within us that stands against each other all the time. No one is only good only evil. Most if us fight the evil and try to be good while others suppress the good or just ignore it.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Leena
I think its a wonderful entry to the contest. The message is very strong and so is your presentation in words and image. Its easier to take the forbidden path and maybe thats why people do get lured into it. But eventually, one has to bear the consequences.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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I think its a wonderful entry to the contest. The message is very strong and so is your presentation in words and image. Its easier to take the forbidden path and maybe thats why people do get lured into it. But eventually, one has to bear the consequences.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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That's for sure. Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Leena. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from robina1978
It is a beautiful Sonnet without faults, the photo goes very well with it. The twist after the second stanza. The an end couplet. I like that it is not about love. Best wishes for the prompt.
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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It is a beautiful Sonnet without faults, the photo goes very well with it. The twist after the second stanza. The an end couplet. I like that it is not about love. Best wishes for the prompt.
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Robina. It sort of is about love. How hopefully love can save mankind before evil destroys it. Lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
I really enjoyed your Sonnet, my friend. I thought you put this together beautifully. Your illustration had matched this so terrific. I love the opening line, "Amid the blind, we walk a darkened path" and it is true, we are forewarned, some just chose to ignore the signs. Great job! ~Kerry
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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I really enjoyed your Sonnet, my friend. I thought you put this together beautifully. Your illustration had matched this so terrific. I love the opening line, "Amid the blind, we walk a darkened path" and it is true, we are forewarned, some just chose to ignore the signs. Great job! ~Kerry
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review, Kerry. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm not trying to be negative or anything but I really think we have to be close. Be ready before hand, that's all I can say. Thank you again, K. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
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Oh, your more than welcome. I don't think your negative at all. It's true, we need to be ready before hand, I totally believe in your poem and the truth of it. ~Kerry
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Amen. Thank you again, Kerry.
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