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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Can't he just 'ink' it away...?!! ;) Had to change it up -- been through horses and spiders and now octopi... hoping the legs aren't doubling every time... lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 19-May-2020


reply by the author on 19-May-2020
    He was in the pee-ink.
Comment from nomi338
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Man that is one sick looking octopus. What is it about green? People and animals that are drawn green just look sick to me. I wonder if it is conditioned, have we been taught that when someone looks green around the gills that they are sick? I don't know but the case of this illustration, dud definitely looks sick

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
    Thanks, nomi.
Comment from Gloria ....
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You know it! I doesn't make a darn bit of difference how many arms you have if what you need, in this instance toilet paper is nowhere within arms reach.

Great fun with this gem, Bill.

Gloria

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
    Thanks, Gloria
Comment from damommy
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Hilarious! All those arms, and no paper. Hahahaha

That face says it all.

What an imagination you have. I like it. 8-)

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2017


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    Thanks, da
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
    Thanks, da
Comment from Teri7
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lol I do not know where you come up with this stuff, but this was pretty funny. To me if an octopus wanted to use its arms it would be way too many. Very good wording and art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
    Thanks, Teri.
Comment from rheabug
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Creation is the name of the game and create you did very nicely. Thank you for sharing your humor in this crazy poem. I give it a thumbs up for this presentation. Hugs

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
    Thanks, rheabug.
Comment from Mistydawn
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It's a cute poem about an octopus, made me chuckle a bit. It has a nice flow and is well within the guidelines, Thank you for sharing your humorous poem with us

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
    Thanks, MD.