Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "summer love on beach (haiku)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
85 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
Burning passion can lead to irrational acts that can and often do leave scars, bruises and many other unpleasant reminders. Yet most of us, myself included, would do it all over again. Such is the leading of real passion.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Burning passion can lead to irrational acts that can and often do leave scars, bruises and many other unpleasant reminders. Yet most of us, myself included, would do it all over again. Such is the leading of real passion.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Oh, thank you, nomi338, for your review of my poem about burning and sometimes irritating passion.
Comment from Zinnia48
Thanks for my biggest laugh of the day! I work from home and can belly laugh as it suits the situation (and this was one). You capture the true nature of that famous scene--and probably of the affair! Thanks! Caroline
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thanks for my biggest laugh of the day! I work from home and can belly laugh as it suits the situation (and this was one). You capture the true nature of that famous scene--and probably of the affair! Thanks! Caroline
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Oh, thank you, Caroline, for your generous, six star review. I am glad this gave you your biggest laugh of the day. You're welcome!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"summer love on beach" haiku, is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading. Ouch pretty well covers it all.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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"summer love on beach" haiku, is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading. Ouch pretty well covers it all.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Oh, thank you, duchessofdrumborg, for your review of my haiku. I am glad you found it a pleasure to read. I will keep writing.
Sis Cat, I look forward to reading your next post.
Bless you, the Duchess
Comment from c_lucas
Sand can cut and gouge
Goes wherever its want
It's stronger than love
But can easily be washed away
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Sand can cut and gouge
Goes wherever its want
It's stronger than love
But can easily be washed away
***
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thank you, C_Lucas, for your poetic review of my poem. I appreciate it.
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You are welcome. SC. Charlie
Comment from Irish Rain
So true, and I don't miss that. I remember being all sandy, itchy, even as a child, just going into the ocean. It swirls sand all over you. BUT, as in the summer love....it's always worth it. Great haiku, blessings....
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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So true, and I don't miss that. I remember being all sandy, itchy, even as a child, just going into the ocean. It swirls sand all over you. BUT, as in the summer love....it's always worth it. Great haiku, blessings....
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Oh, thank you, Irish Rain, for your review of my haiku and sharing your childhood memories of sand. Blessings to you, too.
Comment from Boogienights
I'm not usually into haikus but I really enjoyed this, it made me laugh. I love your choice of picture and the song goes perfectly. Thank you for sharing this, I haven't seen a poem on here with music before.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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I'm not usually into haikus but I really enjoyed this, it made me laugh. I love your choice of picture and the song goes perfectly. Thank you for sharing this, I haven't seen a poem on here with music before.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Oh, thank you, Boogienights, for your review. I wanted my haiku to make people laugh. I am glad it worked.
Comment from brooke harrison
hi sis cat,
what a fun poem! i really liked it
i especially enjoyed the humorous side to it - "itch scratch ouch"
keep up the good work!
all the best - brooke
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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hi sis cat,
what a fun poem! i really liked it
i especially enjoyed the humorous side to it - "itch scratch ouch"
keep up the good work!
all the best - brooke
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Oh, thank you, Brooke, for your review. I am glad you found my poem fun. I will keep up the good work!
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
very interesting love the picture
it says a thousand words the great
touch of this classical music put you over the top
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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very interesting love the picture
it says a thousand words the great
touch of this classical music put you over the top
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Oh, thank you, Abby, for your review. I am glad Sinatra's music put me over the top.
Comment from doggymad
Oh my goodness this was so funny. I was expecting romance not that you didn't provide it. But you certainly told it as it is.
So many books neglect to mention this minor inconvenience when they pen their stories. The only sex on the beach I would consider, is the one in a glass
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Oh my goodness this was so funny. I was expecting romance not that you didn't provide it. But you certainly told it as it is.
So many books neglect to mention this minor inconvenience when they pen their stories. The only sex on the beach I would consider, is the one in a glass
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Oh, thank you, Fredda, for your generous, six star review. I am glad you found this funny. Yes, so many books and movies neglect to mention sand getting beneath the bathing suits during sex on the beach scenes. I also enjoyed giving the reviewer the unexpected. Thanks again.
Comment from Curly Girly
Hi, Sis Cat. Your passionate haiku was fun to read.
Obviously, you must speak from experience.
I can assure you that haystacks have similar problems too.
CG
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Hi, Sis Cat. Your passionate haiku was fun to read.
Obviously, you must speak from experience.
I can assure you that haystacks have similar problems too.
CG
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Oh, no, CG, haystacks! Thank you for your review of my passionate haiku. I am glad you found this fun.
