I think I saved a life today
Just a little gesture is all it takes20 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Waves, I have been there and it is a awful place to be...but it does help when someone shows they care...those three words can go a long way...very nicely written sweet guy...with a great message...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Hi Waves, I have been there and it is a awful place to be...but it does help when someone shows they care...those three words can go a long way...very nicely written sweet guy...with a great message...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Thankyou so much Linda. Yes I have been there myself. Its very easy to ask are you ok
xxdip
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yes I am...had some tough times...but I am working on it...sigh...and you are always soooo welcome my friend...xxoo love ya
Comment from Asem.inspirations
hello DIP, Yes, I guess it shows a person who has depression, that you are concerned, to ask, "Are you okay?" But it really takes a lot more that that. My daughter had depression but "Are you okay does not do it for her?" I leterally have to spend some real quality time with her for her to feel better or for er to have a better day. But I get where you are coming from with this one. It's really a nice thought. Suicide is way more extreme than that. Usually once a person makes up their mind, it takes a lot of work to talk them out of it.
Your poem is excellent though and very well written.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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hello DIP, Yes, I guess it shows a person who has depression, that you are concerned, to ask, "Are you okay?" But it really takes a lot more that that. My daughter had depression but "Are you okay does not do it for her?" I leterally have to spend some real quality time with her for her to feel better or for er to have a better day. But I get where you are coming from with this one. It's really a nice thought. Suicide is way more extreme than that. Usually once a person makes up their mind, it takes a lot of work to talk them out of it.
Your poem is excellent though and very well written.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Having suffered severe depression myself I know exactly what you mean But the words RU Ok are merely a representation saying we all must care and try to understand. There is a day for depression and I am sure it is worldwide called RUOK day.
Thanks for commenting
dip
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Wow I would have never figured that out about you, You always seem so happy. Your poetry never hints it at all. Me too, though I really still wear my depression like a warm coat. I hear you also, really I do.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Dip,
This is some sage advice that you provided in your poem. Ironically, prior to reading your poetry, I did just that.
During the months of June, I have been extremely busy that I have not spoken to some of my friends. Today, I checked on them to determine if they were okay.
Thank you for the thoughtfulness, Dip.
Are you okay?
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Dip,
This is some sage advice that you provided in your poem. Ironically, prior to reading your poetry, I did just that.
During the months of June, I have been extremely busy that I have not spoken to some of my friends. Today, I checked on them to determine if they were okay.
Thank you for the thoughtfulness, Dip.
Are you okay?
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Yep I'm ok Thanks for asking. Yep its not hard to ask someone this question.
thanks for the review much appreciated my poetic friend.
dip
Comment from Minda Whiteley
I suffer from depression myself. Somedays it difficult just to get out of bed. Most of my friends suffer from mental illness, and yet still show so much strength. A true friend is there for you through thick and thin. This poem's message is important. We as humans need love to survive and indeed a phone call can truly "save a life."
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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I suffer from depression myself. Somedays it difficult just to get out of bed. Most of my friends suffer from mental illness, and yet still show so much strength. A true friend is there for you through thick and thin. This poem's message is important. We as humans need love to survive and indeed a phone call can truly "save a life."
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thankyou Minda I wrote this on personal experience. I am so glad you could relate
dip
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend these three words are precious I agree not enough people ask them it can be uplifting to think that a person cares well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Yes my friend these three words are precious I agree not enough people ask them it can be uplifting to think that a person cares well done regards Jill
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thankyou so much Jill much appreciated.
dip
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a wonderful and very touching poem. Dip. It is so very true. I have seen a similar letter posted that went viral a while back. It always sticks in the back of my mind, and I do say, Hi, to many more strangers as I pass them by since I've read it. It is so very true. Hmmm.. It really does make you think. Just a simple smile can turn someone's day around. Well done, my friend and thank you for sharing this lovely piece of poetry. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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This is a wonderful and very touching poem. Dip. It is so very true. I have seen a similar letter posted that went viral a while back. It always sticks in the back of my mind, and I do say, Hi, to many more strangers as I pass them by since I've read it. It is so very true. Hmmm.. It really does make you think. Just a simple smile can turn someone's day around. Well done, my friend and thank you for sharing this lovely piece of poetry. ~Kerry
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Kerry you always make my day! thanks for the great review
dip
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Awe...your very welcome, Dip :)
Comment from Unspoken94
Well, Dip, you pushed me out of my last six. And deservedly
so. Not only have you put this in well written and metered
poem, but your message is huge and this poem should be going
to websites all over the world. Think of the lives that could be saved
tonight if each of us called up someone and just say, "Are you okay?"
Bill
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Well, Dip, you pushed me out of my last six. And deservedly
so. Not only have you put this in well written and metered
poem, but your message is huge and this poem should be going
to websites all over the world. Think of the lives that could be saved
tonight if each of us called up someone and just say, "Are you okay?"
Bill
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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I am so glad you liked this one Bill. Feel free to use it any way you want to that may seem fit to spread this easy question to ask
Your dearest friend down under
dip
Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, Dip, I remember you asking me that question, too, "Are you okay?" Your poem and its accompanying illustration reminded me that this afternoon during a walk and drive I always made a conscious effort to smile and wave to people I passed walking their dogs or jogging. I do not know what cards they have been dealt, but I believe you that a smile, a kind word, or gentle question can help assuage the depression that leads to isolation and suicide. A smile binds us together.
Thank you for sharing and even more for caring.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Yes, Dip, I remember you asking me that question, too, "Are you okay?" Your poem and its accompanying illustration reminded me that this afternoon during a walk and drive I always made a conscious effort to smile and wave to people I passed walking their dogs or jogging. I do not know what cards they have been dealt, but I believe you that a smile, a kind word, or gentle question can help assuage the depression that leads to isolation and suicide. A smile binds us together.
Thank you for sharing and even more for caring.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much Andre as always.
dip
Comment from Irish Rain
Just absolutely beautiful advice Mr. Dip. I always tried to make my customers feel important, to let them know they mattered, when I waitressed. Maybe I helped someone. Blessings....
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Just absolutely beautiful advice Mr. Dip. I always tried to make my customers feel important, to let them know they mattered, when I waitressed. Maybe I helped someone. Blessings....
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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You certainly would have a smile can definitely change one's day
dip
Comment from Thal1959
Nice sentiment rendered in couplets. Though often times a bit pointless. When a person is despondent, they will almost never want to tell someone of it, preferring to be left alone. But it is a nice thought, anyway.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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Nice sentiment rendered in couplets. Though often times a bit pointless. When a person is despondent, they will almost never want to tell someone of it, preferring to be left alone. But it is a nice thought, anyway.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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All my poems are pointless but its a lot of fun writing them lol
Thanks as always for the review Thal.
dip
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