Comment from Susan Chetcuti

Excellent

I have a dog, so this short piece caught my attention. It is truth in every word you wrote. Only a dog lover can know how much of a friend he can be. I enjoyed reading this. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review. I write poems and stories about my dogs, and I hope you will stop by to read more,

~patty~

Comment from pipersfancy

Excellent

A dapper-looking dog, Patty! I'm sure he was a fine friend, indeed, full of playfulness and spirit! Thank you for sharing Harley with us, and good luck in the contest.
pf

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017

Hi pf; thank you so much for the lovely review. Harley was an incredible little dog,

~patty~

Comment from kathleenspalding

Excellent

Aww, too true! Excellent four line poem captures that special love you can only get from a dog. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Great job! PS, sorry he left too soon, but a short life full of love beats a long miserable one any day in my book. All the best.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017

Hi Kathleen; thank you for a lovely review and your condolences,

~patty~

reply by kathleenspalding on 09-Jul-2017

You're welcome

Comment from XGoneX

Excellent

Hi,

This is a great tribute for your dog and a nice entry for the contest. Sad he didn't stay with you for more time.
It flows well, and the alliteration is strong:
Furry, funny friend,
Playful, loving pal,

Good luck.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,

~patty~

Comment from smudge

Exceptional

Dogs are so loyal and true. They are definitely mans best friend and especially women's. A very good write and a lovely picture to go with it. Protecting the pet that protects you.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017

Hi;
thank you so much for the lovely review. My pets have always been a very important part of my life,

~patty~
ps; the lovely, shiny sixth star is a wonderful treat

Comment from His Grayness

Exceptional

Amen and Amen! I love animals and most of all dogs! This photo reminds me of one of my own. I love the message and the work in entirety. Many thanks and keep them coming! HIS GRAYNESS:Vance

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017

Hi Vance; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem.

~patty~

reply by His Grayness on 09-Jul-2017

Always my delight Patty! thanks to you! Vance

Comment from Christina3

Excellent

I love this poem as I am a dog-lover and truly believe they are God's gift to humans. Your font, colors and picture tie the poem together nicely. All of the adjectives chosen are qualities comprised in a true friend. Such is a dog. Great job!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

As a dog lover and owner all my life, I can relate to your poem. Those special dogs always stay with us. Poetry can keep good memories alive and from your words, I Harley Davidson Adams was a special dog.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017

thank you so much for your lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, my friend,

I agree, a dog is loyal to the end. The dog will stand by you through thick and thin, feast and famine. We learn to love them like our children and they would die for us. No better friend than a dog.

Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017

thank you for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello my friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written four-line poem. I think this will do great in the contest I wish you all the best and good luck to you. The picture of your dog is very cute. I can feel some emotions in this which is great. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lala

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~