Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

The sad thing is that no matter how many levels this is sick on, I'm still chuckling...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (He likes the white meat best.)

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Moths are nasty looking critters. But then a spooking looking spider would creep me out too. Excellent use of alliteration in lines 1,2, and 4. Creative end rhyme in last two lines.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017

Thanks, Shari, for the nice review. Bill

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

So Mike is a cross-dresser? Ah--the appeal of those gossamer wings. Clever write with interesting picture. The spider is anemic. This is a good addition to your series. Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017

Thank you, Marilyn, for the nice review. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Ah ha! Ya gotta watch out for the Ghost Faced spider killers. They can disappear and reappear at will. Of course you never see them coming. Just like most cold blooded killers, they have secret fantasies, wearing a part of their victims in private is a classic trait.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017

Thanks, nomi

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Now that is just plain scary for a girl who has no fondness at all for the creepy little eight-legged menaces. Let alone making him sound like the star of The Silence of the Moths! "Put the lotion on the wings!" Creepy. LOL

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017

Thanks, FB

Comment from damommy

Excellent

An arachnid cross-dresser? Wearing the wings in private. LOL

Looks as if he'll be feasting on moth meat for quite a while. Spooky pale is a good phrase. He is certainly that.

Good alliteration.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017

Thanks, da, for the upbeat review. Bill

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Pranka you have penned about the spider. This one did not look as scary as some of the other ones. Very good wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017

Thanks, Teri

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

Uniquely devised poem with a relative picture that appropriately emphasizes the gist of the piece. (The "spooky pale" now has meaning.)

Loved the personification in the ending.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017

Thanks, Cy

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017

Thanks, Cy