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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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So, spider chicks have the same issues too, I see...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Say yes to the dress.)
Comment from BOO ghost
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this looks creepy! The black and red like a black widow spider. Yep, they good fly catchers. I got a spider in the bathroom I let live t catch the bugs. She does a good job so why bother killing her.Enjoy your day, mate.
BOO-tastic!

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
    Thanks, BOO, for saving the spider.
reply by BOO ghost on 05-Jul-2017
    he is still doing his job in the bathroom. he --he.
Comment from nomi338
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Yes, that image in the mirror really is a fair representation of how we look. It does not hate us, it is we who hate ourselves. We hate the fact that we are weak and unable to resist that "come on" which leads us down the path to ruin. It does no good to get angry and give in, we know that's what we wanted to do anyway and any excuse will do.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
    Thanks, nomi.
Comment from BeasPeas
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This little "bugger" is full of whimsy. Amusing to read. Colorful presentation with this perfect artwork for your words. I'm still laughing at this one. The name of Gwen for your spider is off the charts. Great job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
    Thanks, Marilyn, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from damommy
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I guess all females are alike when it comes to looking fat. This one really hit my funny bone.

Calling the spider Gwen was funny by itself. LOL

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
    Thanks, for the review. Bill
Comment from frogbook
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Ha-I have not seen the other spider world's but This one is quite funny. I had to read it twice, duh for me but then I cracked up. Very creative.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
    Thanks, FB
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi Bill; yes, I imagine that spiders will have eating sprees and binges, too. Especially when the dress they just bought makes them look fat. LOL! Thank you for sharing,

~patty~

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
    Thanks, Patty, for the nice review. Bill