Rise
A Diatelle8 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Well done poem that tells of beauty you'll see from above in a hot air balloon.
I am going on a glider this weekend. I would like to go on a balloon too.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Well done poem that tells of beauty you'll see from above in a hot air balloon.
I am going on a glider this weekend. I would like to go on a balloon too.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Thanks and enjoy your ride in the glider. We enjoyed our hot air balloon ride a few years ago.
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You're welcome. I probably will. As I will the balloon ride when i take it.
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Comment from BeasPeas
Your Diatelle is very nice and I like the beautiful illustration which is so freeing. I see this is a romance poem, but it can be taken on two levels--romance and the actual experience of ballooning. Rhyming and form are excellent. Well done. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Your Diatelle is very nice and I like the beautiful illustration which is so freeing. I see this is a romance poem, but it can be taken on two levels--romance and the actual experience of ballooning. Rhyming and form are excellent. Well done. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thank you! Yes, it can be taken on many levels. Appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
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Congratulations on winning the contest with this fine entry, June. Great job.
Comment from Monz1
Beautiful poem. Flows very naturally, love the sub theme beyond the physical poem of facing your fears and not missing out on life,cheers
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Beautiful poem. Flows very naturally, love the sub theme beyond the physical poem of facing your fears and not missing out on life,cheers
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your insights!
Comment from marybell1
I really enjoyed your diatelle poem "Rise". You had all your lines correct and your rhyme was good as it was near rhyming in some lines. e.g 5 and 6 and line 11. It was written well for such a difficult genre.
Best of luck
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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I really enjoyed your diatelle poem "Rise". You had all your lines correct and your rhyme was good as it was near rhyming in some lines. e.g 5 and 6 and line 11. It was written well for such a difficult genre.
Best of luck
Marybell1.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Thank you! It was definitely a challenge, but I enjoyed it.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a good poem.
It has a specific rhyme pattern.
After reading 'Rise', I can clearly see that it meets the requirements of the contest and makes a good entry.
Nice artwork. The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Diatelle.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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You've written a good poem.
It has a specific rhyme pattern.
After reading 'Rise', I can clearly see that it meets the requirements of the contest and makes a good entry.
Nice artwork. The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Diatelle.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written diatelle and a great subject of hot air balloons rising in the sky. It's a beautiful sight to see the colorful ballns drifting around in the air.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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A very well-written diatelle and a great subject of hot air balloons rising in the sky. It's a beautiful sight to see the colorful ballns drifting around in the air.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Yes, my husband convinced me to actually try a balloon ride a few years ago and I was surprised at how much i enjoyed it! Very peaceful. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Comment from mmonaghan777
The picture is perfect to go with the poem along with the shape of the poem. The poem by itself flows to make me want to rise to see what you are describing with such passion.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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The picture is perfect to go with the poem along with the shape of the poem. The poem by itself flows to make me want to rise to see what you are describing with such passion.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-You have a perfect syllable count
and shape for your poem.
-I like your poem about coming on a tour with you:
"floating above valleys
and hills galore"
-This is a good entry,
and I hope you do well.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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-Very nice image.
-You have a perfect syllable count
and shape for your poem.
-I like your poem about coming on a tour with you:
"floating above valleys
and hills galore"
-This is a good entry,
and I hope you do well.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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You are welcome.
