Last Man
A different approach4 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Well this was a fabulous story-I really loved it. It seemed so sincere and the characters were wonderful. A great thing to have a happy ending in this situation. Superb job.
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Well this was a fabulous story-I really loved it. It seemed so sincere and the characters were wonderful. A great thing to have a happy ending in this situation. Superb job.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
Comment from alvina224224
Clever way of dealing with this challenge, author I enjoyed reading this. It has good imagery, an inventive storyline, and conviction that there is hope even on the darker side of life. Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
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Clever way of dealing with this challenge, author I enjoyed reading this. It has good imagery, an inventive storyline, and conviction that there is hope even on the darker side of life. Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
Comment from nor84
I wanted to give you a heads-up review. The required wording is on the door, not at the door. I hope you still have time to fix it. Best of luck in the contest..
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I wanted to give you a heads-up review. The required wording is on the door, not at the door. I hope you still have time to fix it. Best of luck in the contest..
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
Comment from Number11
I really was caught up by this story and i think it could be developed more, there was no question in my mind as to who John was or what was happening, i had a good picture of him and of the robots around him. This style works and it can be worked for a longer story!
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I really was caught up by this story and i think it could be developed more, there was no question in my mind as to who John was or what was happening, i had a good picture of him and of the robots around him. This style works and it can be worked for a longer story!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
