Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Those lights can sure make an 8-legged guy move...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (They made him better than he was.)

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

He might want to dial back that spotlight business a little bit. There is a thing called Raid Bug Spray that is just looking to spoil the day of any and all aspiring spidery aspirants of fame and fortune.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017

I love those old Raid commercials.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Great job with this hilarious poem. You've captured the ambiance perfectly. I
hope Bob does well in his part. Show biz isn't for everyone, but I think he can
carry it off. Marilyn

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017

Thanks, Marilyn.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

It looks like Bob has found his spot. I guess we'll hearing a lot about him when awards time comes around.

He's certainly illuminated. Perfect picture, too. 8-)

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017

Thank you, da, for the nice review. Bill

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery from the art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017

Thanks, Teri.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Aging slow down my reaction
When there was a call for action
My personal light
Is no longer bright.
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The days of my youth are now over
Destined no longer to roll in the clover
I dream of my yester years
Wiping away my many tears.
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It does no good to try and win
Old age is the present trend
Now my light has started to dim
Many more days, chances are slim.
***
Your well written poem struck a chord in me. Good job.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017

Thank you, Charlie, for sharing this poem with this excellent review. Bill

reply by c_lucas on 01-Jul-2017

My pleasure, Bill. Charlie

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Bill. I like it but isn't the count wrong on the last line. 5 syllables and it is like six or 7 syllables depending on how you pronounce camera? lol what do I know right? good luck it's a cute one! xoxo d

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017

Let's see.
Bob loved show bus' ness
roles were il lum in at ing
Now LIGHTS! CAM ER A! AC TION!

Well, shoot! You're right. I was filling seven syllables instead of five. Duh! I will clean this up. I'm going to call it a katuata instead of a 5-7-6. Thanks.