Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Better away than on him for years...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (This bride can run!)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

If you are going to get cold feet at a spider wedding, I guess eight it is.

Too funny and a great read this dreary Sunday afternoon. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

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reply by the author on 17-May-2020

Thank you, Gloria.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

She may be running away, but not nearly as fast as all those who lay eyes on her. Our reasons for running may be different from hers but our need for speed in getting away is nevertheless just as inspired.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017

Thanks, nomi, for commenting. Bill

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

from her arachnid wedding. yeah and sometimes if the female spider is not impressed by the mating dance, she eats the male because she can. A dandy, Bill. Cold feet. He -- he. nice job and good luck in the future with poetry and everyday life. BOO!

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017

Thank you, BOO, for the excellent review. Bill

reply by BOO ghost on 01-Jul-2017

A pleasure.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a pretty neat 5-7-5 poem about the spider that ran away! lol You used very cute and good wording. Very good descriptive wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Oh, dear. I hope she made it. At least, she had eight feel to try.

I really like "eight cold feet." Was it the wasp she was destined to wed? I don't blame her for running. LOL

However, I protect wasps when I can. They are very beneficial creatures.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Thanks, da, reviewing this. Bill

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

LOL! I love the imagery of 'eight cold feet.' The presentation of the white spider was inspired. Thank you for sharing these well written bookmark poems,

~patty~

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Thanks, Patty, for the nice review. Bill

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Well, Bill, wasps and hornets, like the one in your accompanying photo, are mortal enemies in nature with the wasp or the hornet most generally getting the upper hand (or mandible, as the case were).
She didn't get cold feet; it was purely self-preservation that forced her to make like a tree and leave!
Nicely done...
~Dean :)

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

I didn't even notice the bug there. I was trying to project the Spider Lily as a bribes gown. The hornet leads to a Romeo and Juliet scenario.

reply by Dean Kuch on 30-Jun-2017

Yeah, it kinda does, Bill, LOL...