Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This works very well in conjunction with the photograph, not so much on its own though sadly. Not that it matters for this competition though! lol

All the best
GMG

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 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

True, of course, but, unlike haiku, most other short form contest entries derive from illustrations. No sense in playing without going for the win.

Thanks for your insightful observations.

Comment from Thal1959

Excellent

Very charming. I am not partial to the short forms... or to cats, so I guess that's why I enjoyed this one. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Well, I'm glad you decided to check it out, and that you enjoyed it anyway. Thanks for your complimentary review.

reply by Thal1959 on 01-Jul-2017

You're very welcome - it was my pleasure.