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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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S'okay... maybe she got hers braided...!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Extensions, right?)
Comment from Gloria ....
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That is the thing about fashion, one day it's the "mane" thing and the next it's a passing tale.

Excellent humour, Bill and a fine artwork choice to illustrate your wit.

Much enjoyed. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thank you, Gloria
Comment from smudge
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I love the play on word in this 5/7/5 The word mane. It made me smile as I've seen many of those streaks! They definitely grow out! Best wishes Maureen

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
    Thank you, smudge, for the grear review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
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You almost had me until I realized that it was a painting and not a photograph. The image is very arresting an the thought that I have regarding is that if someone would actually change a horse's natural man color like that with dyes or something, then maybe they should be arrested.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
    Is it a painting? That's a pretty good likeness.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. I've even seen shampoo for people using the word "mane" so I think your pun uses a well associated thing. What I don't understand is the purple, green etc colors.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
    Me neither. Horses are too trusting.
Comment from damommy
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Oh, bless his heart. Are the other horses laughing at him?
It doesn't look bad at all.

Good play on words, the 'mane' thing.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
    Thanks, da. We suffer for fashion.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You always say the cutest things in these horse 5-7-5's. Very good wording and great picture. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Teri, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
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Never let a pun pass by without a compliment to the creator. Well done, Bill. I love the photo and appreciate your humor. So much serious stuff going on these days it is good to sit back and have a bit of a giggle - Wendy

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Wendy.