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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Yeah, not a good job..even for an ass!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Redonkulous)
Comment from Gloria ....
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Another most entertaining entry into your Horse world. The indignant response from the mare is precious and written in the vernacular so appropriate for the time.

Excellent wit, Bill and many thanks for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thank you, Gloria.
Comment from nomi338
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Could it be that someone is unclear on the concept? In which country did this occur? Was there money offered? Was it necessary to conceal items in secret places on the body? Were you asked to cross certain borders? There are just too many unanswered questions.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
    They are actually mules. Go figure.
Comment from Ulla
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Ahh, how cute is this, Bill. I love it. Two horses nuzzling like that. Well, that's what they do. Maybe you have a point. I'm looking forward to reading the next one. Your imagination is great. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Ulla, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from BOO ghost
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Comical poem. Guess it makes good horse sense. BD Shutterspeed. haha, he got his wish, to be his mule. You got double the horse power, double the amount of horse dung to scoop out the barn. Not a chore for BOO. Keep posting... BOO-riffic!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
    Thanks, BOO
Comment from damommy
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Hahahaha! I take it she said no.

It certainly looks like they're telling secrets. Makes you wonder, doesn't it, what animals think of us.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
    Thanks, da, for reviewing this. Bill
Comment from Teri7
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lol lol This is just too cute! I love this! You used very cute descriptive wording and I love the picture of the pretty horse too. Great job my friend! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a happening of an incident where, as it appears so or as it were, one tells other that it was sure the guy asked him once to be his mule and it was a matter of shame; I liked.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
    Thanks, ALD