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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Gonna talk that ear right off... even before Sassafras' race!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Insider trading almost.)
Comment from Gloria ....
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Haaaa, too funny. Wouldn't it be cool if horses could whisper the winners in the races though?

Cut photo and a most fun read in your book, Bill. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-May-2020


reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Thanks again, Gloria.
Comment from nomi338
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Man, talk about chewing the fat, chewing a persons ear off, or even think about filling a person'es ear with horse plucky. If you would listen to advice of a horse who is not running in the race you are betting on means, that you are a sucker, Take that horse instead somewhere, establish ownership and make a million bucks over a horse that really talks.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
    Thanks, nomi, for reviewing this. Bill
Comment from Ulla
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Hahahah, you had me laughing out loud here. Wonderful, 5-7-5 and the picture is a hoot. I don;t know where you get it from, but I hurrying on to the next one. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Ulla.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Bill. This is an amusing image and you have done it justice with your 5-7-5 to match. It does look like the horse is whispering in the guy's ear. Whatever it is-the guy looks happy to hear it. Marilyn

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
    Looking at several shots of thus pose, the horse is actually trying to bite his ear and eventually does.
reply by BeasPeas on 27-Jun-2017
    Oops, that's not a good thing. Horses are gorgeous, but they can be a little attitudinal.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. I really like these about the horses. You used very cute descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from BOO ghost
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Hahahahahhahhahahahhahahahaha! Now, that is funny. that makes logical horse sense. BOO will wait until third race. yeah, this one is my favorite by far... keep it up, BOO-tastic!!!!!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
    Thanks, BOO, for the upbeat review. Bill
reply by BOO ghost on 26-Jun-2017
    okie dokie.
Comment from frogbook
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Haha. You are out doing yourself on these dear horse stories. Very funny and sweet. Are u putting these in a book? Would be a great one. Very fun and entertaining.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    Thanks, FB.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
    Thanks, FB.
Comment from damommy
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Hahahaha. It does look like he's talking to the man.

Priceless. What a clever idea.

I don't know how you come up with these things. 8-)

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    Thanks, da.
Comment from Mistydawn
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When I saw the horse whispering in the man's ear, Mr. Ed came to mind. I loved that talking horse. Anyhow, the poem fits perfectly to the art and the image in my mind. Great humorous poem. Thanks for bringing back a childhood memory.

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    Thanks, Misty, for the positive review. Bill