Iris
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "23rd April"A little girl fights leukemia
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Comment from jlsavell
Maria Jose' Garcia,
I love this writing. It is simple yet inviting and gripping, leaving the reader quite hungry for the rest. I will be interested to see where you are going with this.
As for your daughter, I do hope she is doing well. Having a child fight this horrific disease is crushing.
well done
jlsavell
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Maria Jose' Garcia,
I love this writing. It is simple yet inviting and gripping, leaving the reader quite hungry for the rest. I will be interested to see where you are going with this.
As for your daughter, I do hope she is doing well. Having a child fight this horrific disease is crushing.
well done
jlsavell
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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My daughter is doing very well. Thanks for wondering. Just today she's arrived home from a cruise.
Thanks for reading.
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you are welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this chapter Iris got something at her leg and she could not concentrate in anything even at breakfast or play, at last Marcus asked her and suddenly kissed her; I liked.
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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In this chapter Iris got something at her leg and she could not concentrate in anything even at breakfast or play, at last Marcus asked her and suddenly kissed her; I liked.
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thanks for another kind review.
Comment from aryr
This was a good story of a great many emotions. There is always a sense of bantering among siblings but also a deeper sense of caring, compassion, understanding, love and protection. This was shown in the reaction Marcus first presented at home and then followed thru in the school yard. It was also present in the role reversal that Iris and Marcus took in trying to protect their mother. It was very well done, thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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This was a good story of a great many emotions. There is always a sense of bantering among siblings but also a deeper sense of caring, compassion, understanding, love and protection. This was shown in the reaction Marcus first presented at home and then followed thru in the school yard. It was also present in the role reversal that Iris and Marcus took in trying to protect their mother. It was very well done, thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.
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You are so welcome, I am so glad you both survived the ordeal and await further chapters.
