2017 Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Your Memory Lingers "A collection of my poems
25 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Gypsy,
This is a powerful and energetic piece that speaks clearly of your desire for a reunion with a loved one... (who could that be?) *smile* Well worded and the pic goes perfectly! Thnaks!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017
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Gypsy,
This is a powerful and energetic piece that speaks clearly of your desire for a reunion with a loved one... (who could that be?) *smile* Well worded and the pic goes perfectly! Thnaks!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for reminding me of my years in Sacramento--we lived on Lake Greenhaven, near Kennedy High School. Your sexy picture selection and the idea that "people pretend to be someone else" reverberated. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Thank you for reminding me of my years in Sacramento--we lived on Lake Greenhaven, near Kennedy High School. Your sexy picture selection and the idea that "people pretend to be someone else" reverberated. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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I lived by greenhaven lake for three years! Wow, what are the chances of that?
Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy
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We keep getting reminded it truly is a small world! Cheers- Joan
Comment from Unspoken94
Thank you for stepping into my world of free verse. I
feel so alien in your of haiku. But this piece is full
of passion and feeling. I am so familiar with the area
you describe and this made this poem even more
appreciative. -bill
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Thank you for stepping into my world of free verse. I
feel so alien in your of haiku. But this piece is full
of passion and feeling. I am so familiar with the area
you describe and this made this poem even more
appreciative. -bill
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ulla
Hola, Marival, eso si me ha gustado mucho. What a lovely free verse waiting for the love of her life to come back. She's there waiting for him. It's beautiful and so full of hope. Un besito de tu amiga Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Hola, Marival, eso si me ha gustado mucho. What a lovely free verse waiting for the love of her life to come back. She's there waiting for him. It's beautiful and so full of hope. Un besito de tu amiga Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Ulla, you are very kind and I appreciate your review and feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy Blue Rose,
Your poem was very nice. It was also wonderful to read.
The picture of Gypsy and her man friend was really nice too.
Kat
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Hi Gypsy Blue Rose,
Your poem was very nice. It was also wonderful to read.
The picture of Gypsy and her man friend was really nice too.
Kat
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review, Kat.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
this is an excellent free verse filled with memories and longing, pleading with love to return soon while she waits by the river bank. Nicely done
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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this is an excellent free verse filled with memories and longing, pleading with love to return soon while she waits by the river bank. Nicely done
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Barb :)
Gypsy
Comment from krys123
Gypsy;
-I found this poem so beautifully and artistically written as a romantic poem can. The wonderful imagery not only describes but demonstratively expresses vivid metaphors and desirable similes that constitute for an enjambment that carries to the topic throughout the writing without a hiccup or a syntactical break in the meaning and the understanding of your poem. This way your poem flow so smoothly and reads enjoyably.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
PS: this kind of style of romanticism and poetry reminds me of an old fan story poet who passed away her name is Gungalo and I believe her profile is still here. And it could be with 2 L's in Gungalo
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Gypsy;
-I found this poem so beautifully and artistically written as a romantic poem can. The wonderful imagery not only describes but demonstratively expresses vivid metaphors and desirable similes that constitute for an enjambment that carries to the topic throughout the writing without a hiccup or a syntactical break in the meaning and the understanding of your poem. This way your poem flow so smoothly and reads enjoyably.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
PS: this kind of style of romanticism and poetry reminds me of an old fan story poet who passed away her name is Gungalo and I believe her profile is still here. And it could be with 2 L's in Gungalo
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Alex, Dean talked to me about Gungalo.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is well written my friend with such a lovely feel to the poem good strong word choices add to the poem very romantic indeed I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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This is well written my friend with such a lovely feel to the poem good strong word choices add to the poem very romantic indeed I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, WOW sweet angel...thank God for those memories...until I see you again...let the miles burn...annihilate the perverse distance come...love those words...very well written you...love you poem...love your picture...and love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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HI Gypsy, WOW sweet angel...thank God for those memories...until I see you again...let the miles burn...annihilate the perverse distance come...love those words...very well written you...love you poem...love your picture...and love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie. Luv ya xoxox thank you for the six stars.
Gypsy
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your sooooo very welcome....love your poem...sigh...xxoo love ya
Comment from Ric Myworld
I could sense about any reader having had similar thoughts at one time or another, memories stirred. Even maybe a hint of jealousy came over me, then I thought about standing in the cool rain. And said, nope, not me. LOL! Seriously, thanks for sharing another of your fine poems that always put me to thinking. :-)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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I could sense about any reader having had similar thoughts at one time or another, memories stirred. Even maybe a hint of jealousy came over me, then I thought about standing in the cool rain. And said, nope, not me. LOL! Seriously, thanks for sharing another of your fine poems that always put me to thinking. :-)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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LoL ....funny :) Thank you for the review and kind words, honey.
Gypsy
