Untold Stories
Should We Share Everything?15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We open up our hearts in our poetry and tell tales of sadness and of happiness and memories and many identify with our words. We hope to ruffle feathers and make others think, there's a lot of truth in your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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We open up our hearts in our poetry and tell tales of sadness and of happiness and memories and many identify with our words. We hope to ruffle feathers and make others think, there's a lot of truth in your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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thank you Dolly, the truth though sometimes painful is freeing.
Comment from Oatmeal
You did a wonderful job with the challenge that was presented to you. The flow was smooth. Well chosen words are excellent. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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You did a wonderful job with the challenge that was presented to you. The flow was smooth. Well chosen words are excellent. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 20-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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thank you Oatmeal, This was a heartfelt truthful poem and I think the truth always helps us get better.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yes, all of what you've written here is very true, Anonymous Poet. However, that's only if you have something to hide, and let's face it, we all have a skeleton or two in our closets.
Those who claim they do not are either lying or they're fooling themselves.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Yes, all of what you've written here is very true, Anonymous Poet. However, that's only if you have something to hide, and let's face it, we all have a skeleton or two in our closets.
Those who claim they do not are either lying or they're fooling themselves.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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It is true, Getting rid of the skeletons is what revives us. Plus others often have similar skeletons in their own closets just waiting to get out. Thank you as always.
Comment from Irish Rain
Absolutely true. And we don't tell our stories, for fear of ...shame? Yet, when we do, we discover that others share the same story, and others still, can top it. Because we are all human. Loved this, blessings...
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Absolutely true. And we don't tell our stories, for fear of ...shame? Yet, when we do, we discover that others share the same story, and others still, can top it. Because we are all human. Loved this, blessings...
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Thank you Irish, You are an amazing writer and when you tell me you like something I take it with honest respect. Thank you
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You honor me, thank you!!
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think that this is an excellent entry for the contest you should do very well I wish you all the best and good luck to you. I love the way that this flows Siri soft and smooth. Good alliteration and good imagery. Thank you very much for sharing this you are very talented. God bless you. With love, Lola
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think that this is an excellent entry for the contest you should do very well I wish you all the best and good luck to you. I love the way that this flows Siri soft and smooth. Good alliteration and good imagery. Thank you very much for sharing this you are very talented. God bless you. With love, Lola
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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thank you lola , by telling the truth we get so much stronger and I so appreciate your words.
Comment from His Grayness
Certainly this author had put forth a work of exceptionally deep thought and consideration. I always appreciate when a writer reaches deeply into their thoughts, their reflections on life that motivate expression that may bring light to others who may not think so deeply. I enjoyed this and thank the author for a very thoughtful work, and I'm sorry to not have the sixth star I believe this work deserves! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Certainly this author had put forth a work of exceptionally deep thought and consideration. I always appreciate when a writer reaches deeply into their thoughts, their reflections on life that motivate expression that may bring light to others who may not think so deeply. I enjoyed this and thank the author for a very thoughtful work, and I'm sorry to not have the sixth star I believe this work deserves! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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wow, what an honor you have given me. I don't care that you had no six, to tell me you want a six is all I need to continue writing. Life is so interesting and I have made many mistakes but I have also touched the world in positive ways. Thank you for your understanding.
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You earned it! Keep up the great work! Thanks again...Vance
Comment from Cybertron1986
Your piece is quite engaging and relative to me as the reader. Being the middle kid in my family, I take to heart the lesson of control and insight to truth being expressed here. Sometimes, I, too, wonder if I should break the truth that would damage my family's fairy tale. Regardless, we are the captain of our vessel in this journey of life. Thank you for a lovely and unique treat!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Your piece is quite engaging and relative to me as the reader. Being the middle kid in my family, I take to heart the lesson of control and insight to truth being expressed here. Sometimes, I, too, wonder if I should break the truth that would damage my family's fairy tale. Regardless, we are the captain of our vessel in this journey of life. Thank you for a lovely and unique treat!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you Cyber, Truth is writing and as long as we afraid of the truth we will never write. You touched me with your response.
Comment from Eternal Muse
What a striking color presentation you have here, laced with your words of wisdom! Absolutely amazing.
I particularly liked these parts:
The mirror is shattered
The fairy tale destroyed
Happily ever after
A myth that you were told
Replaced by tragic endings
Annihilated dreams
Pauses in the memory
Long forgotten schemes
A very striking work. Should do extremely well in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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What a striking color presentation you have here, laced with your words of wisdom! Absolutely amazing.
I particularly liked these parts:
The mirror is shattered
The fairy tale destroyed
Happily ever after
A myth that you were told
Replaced by tragic endings
Annihilated dreams
Pauses in the memory
Long forgotten schemes
A very striking work. Should do extremely well in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much, Facing yourself makes you become so much better. Fairy tales are just that, fairy tales, real life is much deeper, confusing at times and the biggest words in love are acceptance and forgiveness, but never denial and surrender.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a great poem.
It encourages the reader to open up about deep, dark secrets (if there are any). Speak them and then speak life. Release what is holding one down or what one is holding on to.
I especially like these lines: 'The mirror is shattered
The fairy tale destroyed'- This tells the reader that one has been living in a fantasy instead of reality.
The image shown captures the meaning of this poem. The color of font goes well with the background.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your version of Truth and Honesty.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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You've written a great poem.
It encourages the reader to open up about deep, dark secrets (if there are any). Speak them and then speak life. Release what is holding one down or what one is holding on to.
I especially like these lines: 'The mirror is shattered
The fairy tale destroyed'- This tells the reader that one has been living in a fantasy instead of reality.
The image shown captures the meaning of this poem. The color of font goes well with the background.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your version of Truth and Honesty.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Nikki, I am saving your reviews because they are so honest and reassuring at the same time. Thank you so much for caring.
Comment from frogbook
excellent-very powerful and dangerous observations. Treading lightly or put it all out there? An original and compelling poem for this contest. Great job.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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excellent-very powerful and dangerous observations. Treading lightly or put it all out there? An original and compelling poem for this contest. Great job.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much. I have a tendency to tell the world how I feel. I tried to stop once thinking I was too open about life and then I decided I am just me,/When we tell our stories people learn to tell theirs. What a gift writing is and the friendships I have developed with people like you who always tell me the truth.
