Ignored (haibun style)
Recognizing another's pain.13 total reviews
Comment from donforclearn
This poem is well written. The author's unique description of the human soul verse physical circumstances is excellent. The reader can actual see the images expressed. Thank you for sharing such a good poem.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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This poem is well written. The author's unique description of the human soul verse physical circumstances is excellent. The reader can actual see the images expressed. Thank you for sharing such a good poem.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haibun. Sometimes we can pick up n others heartbreak and suffering bybour observations. We may never get close enough to see for ourselves it is true, but we just know.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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A very well-written haibun. Sometimes we can pick up n others heartbreak and suffering bybour observations. We may never get close enough to see for ourselves it is true, but we just know.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how one has unconsciously or for reason unknown tried to recognise another person's pains in his course of living and acknowledge it to help him to take flight in living; I liked.
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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This speaks how one has unconsciously or for reason unknown tried to recognise another person's pains in his course of living and acknowledge it to help him to take flight in living; I liked.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thank you for reviewing.
