Day Two Day?
My thoughts on Jay.17 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a hearty dedication of a beloved father in remembrance of his son, how diversely father searches the beloved and darling little son everywhere around and feels nowadays of his presence; I liked, a 6-STAR.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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This speaks a hearty dedication of a beloved father in remembrance of his son, how diversely father searches the beloved and darling little son everywhere around and feels nowadays of his presence; I liked, a 6-STAR.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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A sixer I owe you sir.
Hit up my contest poem Called "Agony's Pain!"
Under the contest right about the picture of a white faced ?
Thanks,
Ricky1024.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very sweet poem you have penned about your son. I loved at the end about the one set of foot prints. That is so very true. He does carry us so many times. Very good wording. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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This is a very sweet poem you have penned about your son. I loved at the end about the one set of foot prints. That is so very true. He does carry us so many times. Very good wording. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thanks Teri I am working om promoting this.
Ricky....
Comment from Daizy333
I love the way this poem made me feel it was a little way in before I realized that Jay was no longer with us. Some of the words I didn't understand the meaning like Doth but I could figure it out as I read on.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I love the way this poem made me feel it was a little way in before I realized that Jay was no longer with us. Some of the words I didn't understand the meaning like Doth but I could figure it out as I read on.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thanks.
Sometimes I use 'Old English' it gives it a 'Shakespearian Theme.
Ricky1024.
Comment from MissBlack
I love this. It's dancing my mind with it again and again in different stage. But all the stages say one sentence "I miss you my son". Loss is a huge grief than we can't replace. But it comes back to us every time with a different look. At first we don't recognize that stranger until it makes us cry.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I love this. It's dancing my mind with it again and again in different stage. But all the stages say one sentence "I miss you my son". Loss is a huge grief than we can't replace. But it comes back to us every time with a different look. At first we don't recognize that stranger until it makes us cry.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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This one flowed out so fast as if someone else was in charge. It happens quite often from above. Thanks and Jay as well as I, appreciate it.
Ricky...
Comment from Just A. Pretense
You have the makings of a beautiful poem here! However, a few grammatical mistakes make me stumble while I'm reading and detract from the lyrical flow this should have.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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You have the makings of a beautiful poem here! However, a few grammatical mistakes make me stumble while I'm reading and detract from the lyrical flow this should have.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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My last one similar had the makings of a All Times Best.
This one will also achieve that. All the reviews so far were fantastic.
Thanks,
ricky1024.
Comment from apky
"Even when Life doth pass...
"Those left behind....
"Still need something to Grasp?"
"A face and smile....
"Your voice and tender touch...
"We all still need this...
"So very, very, much...
This is so true, so insightful, so human.
I enjoyed reading your work and came out with a lot of wise and comforting thoughts to cherish.
For this, I thank you.
Apky
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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"Even when Life doth pass...
"Those left behind....
"Still need something to Grasp?"
"A face and smile....
"Your voice and tender touch...
"We all still need this...
"So very, very, much...
This is so true, so insightful, so human.
I enjoyed reading your work and came out with a lot of wise and comforting thoughts to cherish.
For this, I thank you.
Apky
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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And thanks Again!
Ricky....
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Your post are becoming increasingly WEIRD. This is the strangest one yet. At least explain what this is mean to mean....it's unsettling to me....if this is spiritual it needs explanation and not just the 'Glory to God' stuff...puzzled....kind regards Meia
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Your post are becoming increasingly WEIRD. This is the strangest one yet. At least explain what this is mean to mean....it's unsettling to me....if this is spiritual it needs explanation and not just the 'Glory to God' stuff...puzzled....kind regards Meia
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Trying still.....
working...
Ricky
