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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Chapter Two: Hermitage Hall"A short autobiography
10 total reviews
Comment from bookishfabler
and poured the ice-cold liquid over Phillip's carrot-top, sending raspberry punch running down his chest and pooling on the floor around where he laid. I left him there in tears, humiliated by what I had done to him. (I like hearing that. I hate bully's.Even in the movies they are always overweight and always have red hair.)
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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and poured the ice-cold liquid over Phillip's carrot-top, sending raspberry punch running down his chest and pooling on the floor around where he laid. I left him there in tears, humiliated by what I had done to him. (I like hearing that. I hate bully's.Even in the movies they are always overweight and always have red hair.)
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
I do not like bullies either.
Standing up to them is the only way to stop them.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Brett,
I am enjoying your story. I intend to catch up on the chapters I have missed. [You do not have to respond to my reviews]. You are a great storyteller. The fight scene was well detailed. I could see it in my mind. Thanks for sharing such personal memories. Jan
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Brett,
I am enjoying your story. I intend to catch up on the chapters I have missed. [You do not have to respond to my reviews]. You are a great storyteller. The fight scene was well detailed. I could see it in my mind. Thanks for sharing such personal memories. Jan
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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I have to respond to all reviews I receive. Like those Geico commercials say, "It's what I do".
Glad you are enjoying my autobiography.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Brett. I think your biographical posts on your childhood are particularly good ones. My heart goes out to kids who suffer this plight, as in your case the death of your mom. So sorry for that. Your post focuses on childhood in an institution as well as the awful scourge of bullying. Oftentimes, as you mention here, the bully suffers no consequences. The upside of victims' retaliation is that they are usually left alone after that. This is an interesting and clearly written article that I enjoyed reading. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Hi Brett. I think your biographical posts on your childhood are particularly good ones. My heart goes out to kids who suffer this plight, as in your case the death of your mom. So sorry for that. Your post focuses on childhood in an institution as well as the awful scourge of bullying. Oftentimes, as you mention here, the bully suffers no consequences. The upside of victims' retaliation is that they are usually left alone after that. This is an interesting and clearly written article that I enjoyed reading. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Always appreciate your comments and support.
Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I can see you were and still are a survivor Brett.
You had a hard row to hoe after you were left an orphan.
I find your story to be very interesting and worth following. Good job. Nancy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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I can see you were and still are a survivor Brett.
You had a hard row to hoe after you were left an orphan.
I find your story to be very interesting and worth following. Good job. Nancy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thanks.
Appreciate your comments and support.
Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
I liked the story that you wrote about yourself. The things that you've done was interesting to read. I'll be look forward to reading more of
what you'll be writing.
Kat
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Hi Brett,
I liked the story that you wrote about yourself. The things that you've done was interesting to read. I'll be look forward to reading more of
what you'll be writing.
Kat
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
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Hi Brett,
I like reading what you write as it's always interesting.
Kat
Comment from Ricky1024
"An informative piece about 'Hermitage Hall.'
"This was interesting and very well written.
"The author leaves the reviewer wondering?"
"This will be an interesting piece after conclusion.'
"Thanks Brett for sharing this.'
Ricky1024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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"An informative piece about 'Hermitage Hall.'
"This was interesting and very well written.
"The author leaves the reviewer wondering?"
"This will be an interesting piece after conclusion.'
"Thanks Brett for sharing this.'
Ricky1024
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thanks.
Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Bill Schott
I'm guessing we're traveling back before the street days when you first met your dad. There still seems to be a story to tell that precedes HH and comes between these two chapters.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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I'm guessing we're traveling back before the street days when you first met your dad. There still seems to be a story to tell that precedes HH and comes between these two chapters.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from royowen
You had a raw deal in life, but I guess it teaches you to survive, one has to be quicker than physically stronger others, but I've always thought that battling is about taking advantage, and bullies would usually like to intimidate verbally first to gain advantage, but quickness of wit, making the first move works. Well done. Very sad, but you obviously never felt sorry for yourself. Well done, good read. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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You had a raw deal in life, but I guess it teaches you to survive, one has to be quicker than physically stronger others, but I've always thought that battling is about taking advantage, and bullies would usually like to intimidate verbally first to gain advantage, but quickness of wit, making the first move works. Well done. Very sad, but you obviously never felt sorry for yourself. Well done, good read. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Have received many, many reviews and trying to play catch up.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
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Well done Brett
Comment from Sankey
Good work again mate. I love reading true stories. Thanks for sharing. I need to get to bed soon. Absolutely great reading and I look forward to heaps more of this. Cheers for now.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Good work again mate. I love reading true stories. Thanks for sharing. I need to get to bed soon. Absolutely great reading and I look forward to heaps more of this. Cheers for now.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Your comments, support, and reviews appreciated.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Brett; another well written story about the trials of your youth. Your descriptive words allowed me to see the buildings and I tried to imagine you as a little kid struggling to make it in this world.
Thank you for sharing, and I look forward to more,
~patty~
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Hi Brett; another well written story about the trials of your youth. Your descriptive words allowed me to see the buildings and I tried to imagine you as a little kid struggling to make it in this world.
Thank you for sharing, and I look forward to more,
~patty~
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Your comments, support, and reviews always appreciated.
