The Many Wonders of Thee
My thoughts on Jay.27 total reviews
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello friend I really enjoyed reading the spiritual peace I think that it is beautifully written and the flow is smoothly throughout thank you very much for sharing this and God bless you
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hello friend I really enjoyed reading the spiritual peace I think that it is beautifully written and the flow is smoothly throughout thank you very much for sharing this and God bless you
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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LA LA from Mandiceon.?
Butchered that!
Thanks Darling and I'm waiting...
Soup?
Ricky1024.
Comment from Aussie
Thank you Ricky, firstly for sharing the pain in your heart and secondly, I find your words a little confusing. Maybe it's an American thing because I am Australian. Anyway, your way of writing comes across like a rapper dancing. Not the normal speech of most reviewers! I wish you all the best and hope you will continue to write. Blessings, Kay.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you Ricky, firstly for sharing the pain in your heart and secondly, I find your words a little confusing. Maybe it's an American thing because I am Australian. Anyway, your way of writing comes across like a rapper dancing. Not the normal speech of most reviewers! I wish you all the best and hope you will continue to write. Blessings, Kay.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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"This like a lot of my Dedicated works, run pure and clean.
not a word out of place.
Perhaps if you slow down the meter a bit when you read Aussie,
you could better understand it's brilliance?
And, why would I not continue to write because of this?
I was just accepted into "Swathmore's Whos Who."
maybe to understand that, you need to Google
Ricky1024
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Your words are a refreshing change. Keep on writing my friend. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from c_lucas
I am a wee bit lost in this story line. I must say it is very well written (only one error I could see. I, also had my cord around my neck, but not tightly.Keep up the good work.
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I am a wee bit lost in this story line. I must say it is very well written (only one error I could see. I, also had my cord around my neck, but not tightly.Keep up the good work.
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Jasonwas (
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Jason was my son and another reviewer was confused on that.
They probably read for the poet credit and skipped that.
Ricky1024
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Ricky,
I think working through your thoughts and feelings in this way may be very beneficial. It certainly beats ranting in a darkened room, although we may all feel like that sometimes.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hi Ricky,
I think working through your thoughts and feelings in this way may be very beneficial. It certainly beats ranting in a darkened room, although we may all feel like that sometimes.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thanks giraffmang for your review and stopping by.
Ricky1024
Comment from Charmisa Parker
Once again, your poems have touched me. I can sense the sadness and feel the love you have towards your beloved and asking for peace while going through grief.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Once again, your poems have touched me. I can sense the sadness and feel the love you have towards your beloved and asking for peace while going through grief.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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There is an endless supply that even after all this time...
Surprise me...
Thanks Charmisa...
Ricky...
Comment from apky
Timed poem...
"And, as I write these endless and beautiful words to You...
'Straight from my Broken Heart' there is only one thing...
"I want to say, Jay...
...
"Even though You are no more...
'Even though You were taken away...
"Even though I still cry and die inside...
"Each and every night and day...
"The past memories of You...
"Help me along my way...
Yiu really, really write beautiful and moving poetry, Ricky.
As I've said before, I always come away with something to cherish.
Thank you.
Apky
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Timed poem...
"And, as I write these endless and beautiful words to You...
'Straight from my Broken Heart' there is only one thing...
"I want to say, Jay...
...
"Even though You are no more...
'Even though You were taken away...
"Even though I still cry and die inside...
"Each and every night and day...
"The past memories of You...
"Help me along my way...
Yiu really, really write beautiful and moving poetry, Ricky.
As I've said before, I always come away with something to cherish.
Thank you.
Apky
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this one apky.
Thanks,
Ricky1024
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Jason was a and still remains an "Organ-Tissue Donor."
"He started a band at about age fourteen and called it...
"Three Ways to Save."
"I figure that out at first with saving money for we worked together in a supermarket...
"Or so I thought until many years later...
"Three Ways to Save" is exactly what He is still doing to this day with three peoples lives...
"And, to learn more about this amazing program...
"Simply call my dear friend Lara S. Moretti the L.S.W. with...
"The Gift of Life!"
"Philadelphia, Pennsylvania at...
"1-800-DONORS-1 and...
"Thanks from the bottom of Jason's and now Chaz's Heart...
24.
2017.
"Special thanks goes out first to Heavenly Father and his son Jesus Christ, FanStory and Tom the administrator, Fan Art Review, and this talented artist, 'Ricky1024' and my beautiful picture of baby boy...
"Just Jay" This is better. It explains something about the reason for your post. Still, very unusual. God bless you kindest regards Meia x
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Jason was a and still remains an "Organ-Tissue Donor."
"He started a band at about age fourteen and called it...
"Three Ways to Save."
"I figure that out at first with saving money for we worked together in a supermarket...
"Or so I thought until many years later...
"Three Ways to Save" is exactly what He is still doing to this day with three peoples lives...
"And, to learn more about this amazing program...
"Simply call my dear friend Lara S. Moretti the L.S.W. with...
"The Gift of Life!"
"Philadelphia, Pennsylvania at...
"1-800-DONORS-1 and...
"Thanks from the bottom of Jason's and now Chaz's Heart...
24.
2017.
"Special thanks goes out first to Heavenly Father and his son Jesus Christ, FanStory and Tom the administrator, Fan Art Review, and this talented artist, 'Ricky1024' and my beautiful picture of baby boy...
"Just Jay" This is better. It explains something about the reason for your post. Still, very unusual. God bless you kindest regards Meia x
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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You got it in "Save Mode."
Completed only minute later..
Ricky1024.
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oops sorry about that! x
