Rainbows (Tableau Poem)
contest entry-rainbows66 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Rainbows, uses many descriptive lines, layered together like the stripes of a rainbow, to bring the reader into the light as to what constitutes this visual show. Nice.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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This poem, Rainbows, uses many descriptive lines, layered together like the stripes of a rainbow, to bring the reader into the light as to what constitutes this visual show. Nice.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, Bill. I certainly appreciate your review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend I know this poem is about rainbows but think you need to change the colours for presentation the don't work they hurt the eyes I highlighted the poem to read . This is well written full of descriptions and beautiful regards Jill
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hello my friend I know this poem is about rainbows but think you need to change the colours for presentation the don't work they hurt the eyes I highlighted the poem to read . This is well written full of descriptions and beautiful regards Jill
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, Jill, I appreciate it. I just lightened the color.
Comment from Curly Girly
Best wishes in the contest with your lovely poem.
Beautiful words and a lovely image go together well.
The blue font on the vibrant pink background is exceptionally hard to read.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Best wishes in the contest with your lovely poem.
Beautiful words and a lovely image go together well.
The blue font on the vibrant pink background is exceptionally hard to read.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much, my friend, I did just lighten it a bit.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Rainbows are beautiful and I have photographed several throughout my life and I always find them uplifting, just like the words in your wonderful poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Rainbows are beautiful and I have photographed several throughout my life and I always find them uplifting, just like the words in your wonderful poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, Dolly. Your review is much appreciated.
Comment from Gianinas
beautiful picture, representing a rainbow. The free verse defines the concept of the rainbow, with every descriptive line painting again on our cortex the mental picture of the awesome phenomenon.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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beautiful picture, representing a rainbow. The free verse defines the concept of the rainbow, with every descriptive line painting again on our cortex the mental picture of the awesome phenomenon.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend. I appreciate your kind review. It is a Tableau though, not a free verse, lol
Comment from Leena
The rainbow itself is a spectacle, and its good to view the double dose; a not so frequent but natural occurrence. The poem is a catcher too. Good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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The rainbow itself is a spectacle, and its good to view the double dose; a not so frequent but natural occurrence. The poem is a catcher too. Good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much, Leena, I appreciate it.
Comment from Aussie
Sorry I couldn't give you six stars for this lovely poem. Your presentation gave your words so much energy. I really enjoyed the story/poem. You know the real meaning of a rainbow? God made a pact between Himself and man, never to flood the earth again. The Rainbow represents that pact. Well done poet.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Sorry I couldn't give you six stars for this lovely poem. Your presentation gave your words so much energy. I really enjoyed the story/poem. You know the real meaning of a rainbow? God made a pact between Himself and man, never to flood the earth again. The Rainbow represents that pact. Well done poet.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Yes, there is a wonderful story behind the rainbow, I thought to be different and go the scientific way of it. Thanks so much, Kay for your kind review.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a very good poem. The rainbow symbolizes God's promise to never again destroy the world by water. You have chosen a great picture to accompany your poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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This is a very good poem. The rainbow symbolizes God's promise to never again destroy the world by water. You have chosen a great picture to accompany your poem.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Tom. I appreciate your kind comment.
Comment from Janet Foor
I love rainbows and a double rainbow is really a special treat. Beautiful picture to compliment this lovely poem.
Very nice Rainbow poem for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I love rainbows and a double rainbow is really a special treat. Beautiful picture to compliment this lovely poem.
Very nice Rainbow poem for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Janet. It's much appreciated.
Comment from Ann Philips
Rainbows are such a wonderful image that they certainly make a wonderful subject for a poem and contest. I particularly liked your line "iridescent awe". It seemed so appropriate for the topic. The repetitive five syllable line was an interesting choice for this poem. Was there a particular reason you decided on that?
Another line I liked was the first one, "Nature's defiance". It was a very strong image and "defiance" is not something I would normally associate with rainbows.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Rainbows are such a wonderful image that they certainly make a wonderful subject for a poem and contest. I particularly liked your line "iridescent awe". It seemed so appropriate for the topic. The repetitive five syllable line was an interesting choice for this poem. Was there a particular reason you decided on that?
Another line I liked was the first one, "Nature's defiance". It was a very strong image and "defiance" is not something I would normally associate with rainbows.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you so so very much. my friend. Yes, it is a defiance, an unbelievable awe astounding defiance of nature.
