2018 Bernie and Howie Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Howie and Bernie live it up"...stories and poems about the boys
54 total reviews
Comment from apky
You're back with my buddies and their cute little ways, Patty. I really marvel at how you're able to very convincingly get the reader into the characters of Bernie and Howie. You descriptions are so vivid that I could see the little chap here:
Howie stood up to stretch his little body. Placing his forefeet out in front of him, he bent at his waist and listened to the muscles in his body snap and crackle. The rounded face and severe underbite made for an adorable dog. Howie knew it and played to people with his looks. His best trick was to stand on his back legs and beg with his front feet. The Mistress called it 'Pretty Feet,' and he could always win a special treat from her by using this ploy.
A welcome and enjoyable read.
Aki
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
You're back with my buddies and their cute little ways, Patty. I really marvel at how you're able to very convincingly get the reader into the characters of Bernie and Howie. You descriptions are so vivid that I could see the little chap here:
Howie stood up to stretch his little body. Placing his forefeet out in front of him, he bent at his waist and listened to the muscles in his body snap and crackle. The rounded face and severe underbite made for an adorable dog. Howie knew it and played to people with his looks. His best trick was to stand on his back legs and beg with his front feet. The Mistress called it 'Pretty Feet,' and he could always win a special treat from her by using this ploy.
A welcome and enjoyable read.
Aki
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hi Aki; I'm so glad you enjoy 'Howie and Bernie' stories. I truly appreciate your warm words of encouragement. Thank you for the lovely review,
~patty~
Comment from Caressa_08
Your dogs are adorable, and your story shows why so many people own an animal as these two, though everyone claims there pet is unique over any other, which is so true...And they are man's best friend, and can be a woman's, too... if given even basic needs and lots of love and attention...do really help us humans get through so much...those who take to animals as these...and with your photos show just how so very cute they are.
If it wasn't for a border collie years ago, who was so very intelligent, actually saying all 3 of my kid's names & myself, who I taught to talk as had a lot of free time so many years ago, and Boy, did he ever surprise me with doing just that... just such a good pet for my family then that just came to us in the nick of time...as it seemed...he needed us as much as we did him...such a Godsend, Dear Poncho, was.
Thanks for sharing...Caressa_08
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
Your dogs are adorable, and your story shows why so many people own an animal as these two, though everyone claims there pet is unique over any other, which is so true...And they are man's best friend, and can be a woman's, too... if given even basic needs and lots of love and attention...do really help us humans get through so much...those who take to animals as these...and with your photos show just how so very cute they are.
If it wasn't for a border collie years ago, who was so very intelligent, actually saying all 3 of my kid's names & myself, who I taught to talk as had a lot of free time so many years ago, and Boy, did he ever surprise me with doing just that... just such a good pet for my family then that just came to us in the nick of time...as it seemed...he needed us as much as we did him...such a Godsend, Dear Poncho, was.
Thanks for sharing...Caressa_08
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hi Caressa; thank you so much for the lovely review. I enjoyed hearing about your dog, Poncho. That is a wonderful trick that you were able to teach him. Bernie 'talks,' but I haven't been able to teach him any human words.
~patty~
Comment from WriterKathy
I loved reading this! It was so beautifully written. Telling the story from Howie and Bernie's perspective was fun and made me smile! This would be perfect to read to my grand kids! They would love it. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
I loved reading this! It was so beautifully written. Telling the story from Howie and Bernie's perspective was fun and made me smile! This would be perfect to read to my grand kids! They would love it. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hi there; I'm so glad you enjoy my tales of 'Howie and Bernie.' They pop up their furry tails (tales) once in awhile, so you will be reading more about them in the coming months.
Your review made me smile,
~patty~
Comment from smerryman3
Very enjoyable! You have great agility in narrating your stories from different perspectives. I loved how your puppies refer to you and your husband as "the Mistress and the Man." Well done and very sweet story. Those pictures are adorable!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
Very enjoyable! You have great agility in narrating your stories from different perspectives. I loved how your puppies refer to you and your husband as "the Mistress and the Man." Well done and very sweet story. Those pictures are adorable!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hi there; thank you so much for the great review of this piece. I think my 'Howie and Bernie' stories are my favorite things to write,
~patty~
Comment from BlueTiger
Good job, Patty! I enjoy your dog-point-of-view stories, they're a lot of fun to read. Sounds like they had an adventure! I haven't been on the site for a while, but look forward to reading more from you.
-Blue
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
Good job, Patty! I enjoy your dog-point-of-view stories, they're a lot of fun to read. Sounds like they had an adventure! I haven't been on the site for a while, but look forward to reading more from you.
-Blue
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hi Blue; good to see you back! Thank you so much for the lovely review.
~patty~
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello friend I really enjoyed reading this beautifully written piece about Holly and Bernie this is nicely done good flow and structure thank you very much for sharing this with us and God bless you
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
Hello friend I really enjoyed reading this beautifully written piece about Holly and Bernie this is nicely done good flow and structure thank you very much for sharing this with us and God bless you
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hi La La; thank you so much for the lovely review,
~patty~
Comment from bhogg
Such a nice post. If someone can read this and not get a smile, well ... not sure I want to meet them. I enjoyed most, the visualization of the dogs. I could just see them in every scenario you wrote. Well done. Bill
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
Such a nice post. If someone can read this and not get a smile, well ... not sure I want to meet them. I enjoyed most, the visualization of the dogs. I could just see them in every scenario you wrote. Well done. Bill
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hi Bill; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this latest 'Howie and Bernie' story,
~patty~
Comment from Ricky1024
This was an easy read with great flow and
no Grammerical issues.
Theme and imagery present.
Adjective Content.....
{So important} was excellent.
Objective Content was superb.
Thanks,
Ricky1024.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
This was an easy read with great flow and
no Grammerical issues.
Theme and imagery present.
Adjective Content.....
{So important} was excellent.
Objective Content was superb.
Thanks,
Ricky1024.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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thank you so much for the lovely review,
~patty~
Comment from Teri7
This is a very sweet story about your two precious little angels. They are just adorable. I bet they did get spoiled there. I am glad they are loved when you are away. Enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
This is a very sweet story about your two precious little angels. They are just adorable. I bet they did get spoiled there. I am glad they are loved when you are away. Enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hi Teri; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story,
~patty~
Comment from JW
Sigh. What a cute story. Your little one reminds me of one of mine - Scotty - he's a small 2-year-old St. Charles spaniel. He's cute as a button, very loving, very spoiled, extremely picky when it's mealtime, and believe-or-not, the aggressor when my two dogs play despite the fact that Spock is a mid-size 4-year-old boxer/terrier/pit bull mix.
Both are rescue animals.
And yes, I am running a Star Trek theme here when it comes to naming them. JW
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
Sigh. What a cute story. Your little one reminds me of one of mine - Scotty - he's a small 2-year-old St. Charles spaniel. He's cute as a button, very loving, very spoiled, extremely picky when it's mealtime, and believe-or-not, the aggressor when my two dogs play despite the fact that Spock is a mid-size 4-year-old boxer/terrier/pit bull mix.
Both are rescue animals.
And yes, I am running a Star Trek theme here when it comes to naming them. JW
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I love your dogs' names. I always name my pets on a theme. Howie is named after Howard on the Big Bang Theory, and Bernie is named after 'Bernadette,' Howard's girl friend. (Of course, Bernie is a male, but it works.)
I'm pretty sure both of my boys would be very aggressive towards big dogs - they both have short man's complex!
~patty~