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2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Howie and Bernie live it up"
...stories and poems about the boys

54 total reviews 
Comment from Ann Philips
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The tale of your two pups was so sweet. The kennel sounds like a wonderful place. Dogs are so special and loving. The story clearly portrays some of reasons dogs make such an enjoyable pet for the person who understands them. It the affection and enjoyment they can provide.
The descriptive phrases for the dogs behavior are very well done. Telling the tale from the dog's viewpoint made it personal and set the tone of love and affection.
It's a very pleasing story. The opening paragraph sets up the situation well, but was a little dry. It might have been nice to have a more personal, less clinical moment added.
My dog died a few months ago, so your story reminded me of how wonderful that companionship is.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and advice,

    ~patty~
Comment from emptypage
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I love this, Patty. I wish I trusted the kennels around here to be so good. But I always took my dogs with me almost everywhere I went, and I couldn't leave town without them. I might have, though, with a place this nice!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    Hi Marla; I am so happy I have this vet and their kennel to leave the boys with - I can actually go places without having any guilt. We probably don't do as many weekend trips or even day trips because of the boys - but we take them anywhere we can and they just love it.

    Thank you for reading,

    ~patty~
Comment from Fridayauthor
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We always worry about our pets during our absence but they are probably as adaptable as you paint them in this nicely written posting.

Very well done.


They knew they had been there for a while.
They knew they had been here for a while. ?? or...
They knew they hadn't been there for a while.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    Hi there; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement. I went back and looked at the sentence you indicated and I did an edit to 'here.'

    I appreciate your time and I hope you'll stop by again,

    ~patty~
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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A doggie suite--how wonderful. I don't know if it would impress Katie Jo however. She is really too attached to me for her own good.. I'm here all but maybe 15 hours a week, so she is very used to having me at home. When I leave, I can hear her whining and throwing a fit two blocks away. I'm glad the boys handled it well, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
    Hi Debbie; thank you so much for this wonderful review of my story about my boys. They really enjoy their time at the vet's kennel. They know all of the techs and they are terribly spoiled. They go crazy when they see me waiting for them at the counter, but I know they are well taken care of - otherwise, I don't think I would travel anywhere.

    ~patty~
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Seems they were having a real good time at the kennel.

Pet stories are always intriguing.

How to wait to see what other adventures these two may get involved in.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
    Hi Brett; thank you for reading this latest offering of a 'Howie and Bernie' story. I'm sure the summer will bring new adventures to the boys,

    ~patty~
Comment from mbroyles2
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A terrific kennel is hard to find sometimes. It's good to hear that Bernie and Howie are spoiled. I always enjoy reading about their antics.
And the pictures are adorable.
Excellent writing.
Michael

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
    Hi Michael; I'm so glad you enjoyed the latest offering of my 'Howie and Bernie' stories. They are indeed spoiled when I'm away, but it is always good to come home to their happy little faces.

    Thank you for the lovely review,

    ~patty~
Comment from Sallyo
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This sounds like a doggy motel with six stars. Beautifully written and the dogs come across as real characters. Telly? Really? We have two telly-watchers in our lot. Russell and Pepper both watch with great attention.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
    Hi there - yes, believe it or not, they have a big screen TV always turned to Animal Planet. I think the boys thought they were in heaven. When I toured the kennel, I couldn't believe it. It wasn't much more expensive than the usual daily rate, so I thought they deserved it - after all, they are earning a bit of money these days as I sell their stories in a few places,

    ~patty~
    THANK YOU so much for the lovely six stars!
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hi ~patty~ I can see how your cute story is on the Best All list
Your pictures are so goo,and the way you describe the stay and the vets . I had such a good time reading.

Smiles
Gert

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    Hi Gert;
    thank you so much for the wonderful review. Writing about 'Howie and Bernie' is one of life's joys,

    ~patty~
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Cute as dogs for real. I went to a family's wedding and had to be away from my cats Zelda and Hades for five days. It was miserable lol. I was always worried about them and they were just fine! Good read for me this early morning. Thanks and keep loving them. They are grand! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    Hi there; thank you so much for the lovely review. 'Howie and Bernie' are good boys - I think they miss me while they are in the kennel, but they have a good time with the vet techs. The ladies rarely want me to take them home!

    ~patty~
Comment from pbomar1115
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Two happy dogs are a joy to the dog sitters or tech. For veterinarians, it is easy for them to know the kind of home the dogs come from. I could not imagine a person who treats their pet with cruelty using kennels.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
    Hi Phillip; thank you so much for the lovely review. The boys do have a good time at the vet's kennel. The ladies rarely want to let them go home,

    ~patty~
reply by pbomar1115 on 23-Jun-2017
    You're welcome, Patty.

    Phillip