Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I wish I had a 6 left just for the sentiments alone, the words are worth another 6. So annoying not to have any left, we need a few more! You have both been blessed with each other and a lovely family. Very well done, and a pleasure to read. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Sandra; thank you SO much for the virtual six. I loved writing this poem - he is an easy subject to write about! I do agree with you about the measly amount of sixes we get; some weeks there are SO MANY great things to read and review!

I appreciate your time to read and review and I'm honored by your words,

~patty~

Comment from Leena

Excellent

Hi Patti, thats a stunning photograph. Your short poem has so much of sentiment in it and is heart warming. Its always a pleasure to see or meet a loving couple. May your love and friendship always grow. Regards.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Leena; thank you so much for reading and reviewing this simple love poem for the man in my life. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate your comments about my 'stunning' photograph. He is still a looker! After thirty-four years, he still makes my heart go pitter patter,

~patty~

reply by Leena on 20-Jun-2017

Aww... thats so sweet. May God bless you both abundantly.... :)

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

You're so lucky to have such a wonderful man in your life. To say that my prince charming turned into a frog would be an insult to frogs. Hope you both had a great Father's day.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Cindy; I am very lucky and I never take that fact for granted. I hope you find the right man for you - who knows? He might be just around the corner. When I met Dave, I wasn't looking in any way, shape, or form.

~patty~

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello there my dear friend I really enjoyed reading this loon poem I think that it is very cute and such a nice way to express your feelings about your husband thank you so much for sharing this with us and God bless you

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi La La; thank you so much for reading and reviewing this little poem. It flowed from my heart for my sweet hubby,

~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Lune. It is so much easier when your lover is also your best friend. It helps to control the emotions and their is always something to talk about and you never ger bored.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Sandra; I couldn't agree with you more. Life is so much easier when all of your concentration can be focused on one person. Thank you, as always, for continuing to support my work,

~patty~

Comment from Rlegel99

Excellent

Poem about a love written in the lune form. Enjoyed the author notes. Your word choice and artwork conveys your feelings about the subject very well. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

thank you for such a lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Patty,

This is beautiful. I hope he had a great Father's Day, and you had a great Mother's Day.

I like the crescent moon shape explanation the best!

TC

PS: He's a hottie, too!

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi there - back off, woman! He's MINE. But, seriously, thank you so much for the compliment. Dave is truly the most awesome person to spend the rest of my days with - I couldn't be happier, and it seems that our love has only continued to grow in the last thirty-four years.

I'm a very lucky woman,

~patty~

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Nice tribute to a father on father's day.
Theme equaled imagery.
Adjective content on que,
Mural filling now with color.
Objective Content just kicked in and was great.
Grammar called up on "The Grammar phone" and said no errors present.
A total nice piece.
Thanks,
Ricky1024.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

thank you so much for your thoughtful and concise review,

~patty~

Comment from Charmisa Parker

Excellent

I always had a thing for romantic poems. I love the picture. I can tell he's a loving, mature, sincere man. It's really nice to see poems dedicated to beloved ones. Great job!

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 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Charmisa; thank you so much for the lovely review. My hubby is a loving, mature and sincere man. We've really grown up together in our almost thirty-four years together, and I've had the good fortune to watch him become the man he is,

~patty~