Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Best Friend and Lover" is a delightful piece. Short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to both read and review a poem of this caliber. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review this poem. I wrote it for my husband because he is simply my world. I so appreciate your kind words of encouragement,

~patty~

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 21-Jun-2017

~patty~, you're more than welcome. It was a true pleasure.

Best wishes, the Duchess

Comment from Halfree

Excellent

I am not sure if I grasp the art form, Lune, but then the world is filled with things I cannot grasp. This one I, well, I kinda liked it... a bit more than kinda, Glad I read this little gem.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you liked the poem - the poetic form is one of the easier ones to write - in my opinion. You should read my author's notes and see if you can write one,

~patty~

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Lovely photo Patty and a lovely Lune poem for this man you share you life with.
Beautiful author's notes that really brings out the emotions in this read for us.
Well done,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Valda; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words about the poem, the photo and my author's notes.

Thank you for your continuing support,
~patty~

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

This is very well written my friend a lovely poem for your husband and soul mate some people don't know what its like to have a companion as caring as this you are very lucky you expressed your feelings well I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Jill; thank you so much for the lovely review. I do appreciate that I'm a very lucky woman and I cherish every day. I appreciate your continuing support of my work,

~patty~

Comment from Kingsrookviii

Exceptional

I love this poem and how much love that fairly drips from it! Also, I am sort of chomping at the bit to try a lune. I don't remember trying one yet so far. I am experimenting with haiku and some 5-7-5 stuff. The picture, note and poem tell a great story. Great work, my friend. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Bruce; thank you so much for the high praise for this lune poem for my hubby. You should really try the lune poetic form, they are fun to write.

I appreciate your compliments on the picture, notes and poem,

~patty~

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

I am so glad you have a wonderful hubby, you deserve one after all you have been through. A nice lune for him on Father's Day. I am sure he was pleased with it, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Debbie; thank you so much for your kind words and wonderful review. He was indeed very happy with the poem.

~patty~

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Sounds like a lovely man, lovely lune. Great picture too!! You are lucky to have your husband as your best friend also...blessings...

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Karyn; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem and the picture of my hubby. This was a fun write,

~patty~

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Honouring one's loved ones in poetry has always dear to my heart. So I am pleased to see you doing it in this fine 3/5/3 lune poem Patty. Great tribute, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Roy; thank you for reading my latest poetic offering. I wanted to pen a simple tribute to my hubby, and I think this came out just right,

~patty~

reply by royowen on 20-Jun-2017

Most welcome

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A great tribute to your wonderful husband and I hope you have a long and happy life together, a warm and sentimental write with deep love, best wishes, Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Dolly; thank you so much for the lovely review and wonderful wishes. I know I'm a very lucky woman and I'm truly blessed.

~patty~

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I wish I had a sixer for you. Your Lune says so much in just a few words. I'm so happy for the both of you. He looks like a great guy. Appreciation of each other is such a gift. Marilyn

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017

Hi Marilyn; thank you so much for the wonderful review. I will take a virtual six anytime - its the thought that counts! Dave is indeed a wonderful guy and he's so good to me. I never take him or his love for granted.

~patty~