My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Best Friend and Lover"a collection of my poetry
69 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
So sweet, the love you share. Treasure every moment together, love in it's truest form is so rare, I know you know this, wonderful write and so adorable kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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So sweet, the love you share. Treasure every moment together, love in it's truest form is so rare, I know you know this, wonderful write and so adorable kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hi Meia; thank you for the lovely sentiment. I am so lucky to have Dave by my side,
~patty~
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Great format and subject matter. I think it is the most wonderful thing to find such a partner for life that has given you full measures of laughter, love and himself. Awesome write. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Great format and subject matter. I think it is the most wonderful thing to find such a partner for life that has given you full measures of laughter, love and himself. Awesome write. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm indeed a lucky woman to have this wonderful man by my side,
~patty~
Comment from Kazzawin
A lovely, short poem in tribute to your husband.
One can never overestimate the value of deep love and true companionship.
You have summed up your relationship with simple yet effective words, told from the heart
and penned with love : )
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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A lovely, short poem in tribute to your husband.
One can never overestimate the value of deep love and true companionship.
You have summed up your relationship with simple yet effective words, told from the heart
and penned with love : )
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hi there; thank you so much for this lovely review of my poem for my husband. He is the best thing that ever happened to me, and I could never take him for granted.
~patty~
Comment from Caressa_08
Oh, your hubby and your best friend has that sparkle in his eye which reminds me of the same one that mine gets when he talks to our adult daughter so very many States away. And the photo of yours doing just doing that, with him appearing to be this, a very happy occasion for him on Father's Day 2017...does benefit greatly to your Lune poem.
Thanks for sharing, Caressa_08
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Oh, your hubby and your best friend has that sparkle in his eye which reminds me of the same one that mine gets when he talks to our adult daughter so very many States away. And the photo of yours doing just doing that, with him appearing to be this, a very happy occasion for him on Father's Day 2017...does benefit greatly to your Lune poem.
Thanks for sharing, Caressa_08
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hi Caressa; thank you so much for the lovely review. Where does your daughter live? Our daughter is serving in the Air Force in Virginia at Langley.
I appreciate your warm comments,
~patty~
Comment from JanPeregrine
Beautiful and short. I'd never heard of a lune before and was inspired to write one.
he has a great smile
lucky you
your love shall live on
Your poem is sweet. Thanks for making me smile too!
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Beautiful and short. I'd never heard of a lune before and was inspired to write one.
he has a great smile
lucky you
your love shall live on
Your poem is sweet. Thanks for making me smile too!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hi; I greatly appreciate your time to review - was there something missing that you didn't feel it deserving of five stars?
~patty~
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Well, I'm new to lune writing and can't judge if it could be better, so I rated it according to what seemed right for a nonexpert!
Comment from mbroyles2
I can't think of no one more deserving of a wonderful person to share their life with.
Terrific poem with clear and crisp words.
Excellent writing.
Michael
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I can't think of no one more deserving of a wonderful person to share their life with.
Terrific poem with clear and crisp words.
Excellent writing.
Michael
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hi Michael; thank you so much for this kind and thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your warm words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Patty, What a great LUNE, so nicely said and one can see the sincerety in your spoken word .A great photo and your authors notes tell us of a lovling happy relationship. That the only one to have I have been married 43 years and he is my best friend. Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hi Patty, What a great LUNE, so nicely said and one can see the sincerety in your spoken word .A great photo and your authors notes tell us of a lovling happy relationship. That the only one to have I have been married 43 years and he is my best friend. Cheers Christine
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hi Christine; thank you for reading my lune to my hubby. Congratulations on your own 43 years! That's wonderful.
~patty~
Comment from Rubylou
What a beautiful way to honor your husband, especially celebrating Father's Day.
I could feel the love through your words and see it back in his eyes in the photo.
I have to say, I am blessed as well with a wonderful husband of thirty-six years so I share your feelings.
Rubylou
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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What a beautiful way to honor your husband, especially celebrating Father's Day.
I could feel the love through your words and see it back in his eyes in the photo.
I have to say, I am blessed as well with a wonderful husband of thirty-six years so I share your feelings.
Rubylou
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hi Rubylou; thank you for stopping by to read and review my little lune about my hubby. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your lune poem "Best friend and Lover". You followed all the rules for this genre, and chose a nice photo of him.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I enjoyed reading your lune poem "Best friend and Lover". You followed all the rules for this genre, and chose a nice photo of him.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Ann Philips
The lune is another form that doesn't provide much opportunity to develop your chosen subject. You certainly were able to provide hints on why he was a "best friend and lover" while meeting the requirements.
I would have enjoyed a few more hints. It would be nice to have more insight into why he is "wonderful". It's such a challenge to provide information and images when you have so few words.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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The lune is another form that doesn't provide much opportunity to develop your chosen subject. You certainly were able to provide hints on why he was a "best friend and lover" while meeting the requirements.
I would have enjoyed a few more hints. It would be nice to have more insight into why he is "wonderful". It's such a challenge to provide information and images when you have so few words.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hi Ann; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review this poem. The lune is a difficult form to work with because the syllable count limits you to a few words. I'm glad you enjoyed the 'hints' that I provided.
~patty~
