Perennials of War
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Comment from royowen
This was a lovely warm chapter Barbara, and a pleasure to read, daughters are indeed a father's delight and the apple of his eye. In this chapter Anderson assures Benjamin that everything will be done to have his daughter respected and looked after. Brilliant episode my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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This was a lovely warm chapter Barbara, and a pleasure to read, daughters are indeed a father's delight and the apple of his eye. In this chapter Anderson assures Benjamin that everything will be done to have his daughter respected and looked after. Brilliant episode my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Ben Colder
Barbara, this is good in more way than one. I have learned much about Jewish culture. The star of David is interesting. The shield of David. I never knew this. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Barbara, this is good in more way than one. I have learned much about Jewish culture. The star of David is interesting. The shield of David. I never knew this. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful encouragement.
Comment from Sasha
Anderson continues to reassure Shana's family he will take very good care of her. I think he made a good impression on them. I love his little girl, her honestly is simply charming. I do hope he is able to get some answers to the all too many questions about who is who and where do the Russians' fit into all of this. Very nice work with this chapter and I anxiously look forward to reading the next chapter.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Anderson continues to reassure Shana's family he will take very good care of her. I think he made a good impression on them. I love his little girl, her honestly is simply charming. I do hope he is able to get some answers to the all too many questions about who is who and where do the Russians' fit into all of this. Very nice work with this chapter and I anxiously look forward to reading the next chapter.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
What beautiful writing showing us the wonderful relationship between Emily and her Dad (smiles)
I liked how you told us about the Jewish faith and the history of the star of David.
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Hello Barb
What beautiful writing showing us the wonderful relationship between Emily and her Dad (smiles)
I liked how you told us about the Jewish faith and the history of the star of David.
Gert
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Smiles to you Barb
Gert
Comment from mbroyles2
A fitting chapter for Father's day. A look at how a father is protective of his daughter no matter what age they are.
I loved the interaction between Emily and Benjamin.
Terrific story so far.
Michael
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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A fitting chapter for Father's day. A look at how a father is protective of his daughter no matter what age they are.
I loved the interaction between Emily and Benjamin.
Terrific story so far.
Michael
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement. I was such a daddy's girl. I lost my dad two years ago and I miss him so much. He was always extremely protective of me.
Comment from Sankey
Another interesting chapter. Good reading as usual. I like the explanation of the Star of David. and the discussion between the two cultures and so on. One spag. You('}r(e) Orthodox Jewish
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Another interesting chapter. Good reading as usual. I like the explanation of the Star of David. and the discussion between the two cultures and so on. One spag. You('}r(e) Orthodox Jewish
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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I will make that correction, thank you for the catch.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is great writing indeed. The story's moving along nicely.
'you don't need to that' = 'you don't need to do that'
I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Hi Barbara, this is great writing indeed. The story's moving along nicely.
'you don't need to that' = 'you don't need to do that'
I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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I will add that little word do. Thank you for the catch.
Comment from c_lucas
The two men knew the importance of protecting their daughters. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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The two men knew the importance of protecting their daughters. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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Yo're welcome
