Be Green
One line poem4 total reviews
Comment from Jay Squires
And I thought a 2-4-2 was limiting. I don't think I'd try a one line poem. I'm not familiar with the statement, "Be Green" so to me, it would mean "keep things green." Tell me if I'm being naive or lead a sheltered life. LOL, Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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And I thought a 2-4-2 was limiting. I don't think I'd try a one line poem. I'm not familiar with the statement, "Be Green" so to me, it would mean "keep things green." Tell me if I'm being naive or lead a sheltered life. LOL, Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Hi Jay,
I haven't been here for a while and I'd forgotten that I wrote this or entered the contest. I just happened to see it listed as an open contest and come up with the line. I meant it as being green as environmentally. It was also kind of a jab at the anti-climate control people. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from LaRosa
Makes sense to me!
I can picture it as a billboard sign.
How in the world am I going to get one hundred fifty 'characters' on it, though? only 4 more to go. Did it! :)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Makes sense to me!
I can picture it as a billboard sign.
How in the world am I going to get one hundred fifty 'characters' on it, though? only 4 more to go. Did it! :)
Comment Written 17-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Yeah, it's hard to write a very long review on such a short piece, isn't it? Thank you for making the effort. I do appreciate the support.
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krys123 just posted a set of rules for how to evaluate poetry. I just finished reading it and then turned to my replies and here you are.
Hopefully, I'll do better next time!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like your poem, Delahay.
-I also agree with your message.
-There is no point in being mean.
-Much better to "keep things green,"
everyone benefits by that.
-I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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-I like your poem, Delahay.
-I also agree with your message.
-There is no point in being mean.
-Much better to "keep things green,"
everyone benefits by that.
-I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading my (very) short poem. I appreciate your feedback and kind comments.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from loismddavis
what can one say about one line poetry but I get it and agree with your sentiments. It would have been better presented in green with perhaps a picture
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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what can one say about one line poetry but I get it and agree with your sentiments. It would have been better presented in green with perhaps a picture
Comment Written 17-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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There is not much one can say about such a short piece. I always have trouble with coming up with enough to say to satisfy the requirements. Thank you for the effort and for the feedback. I should have included a picture but I just came up with it very quickly and posted it without thinking about finding one.
