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Return To The Land Where They Began

My daughter and hubby live in England I worry no set meter

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Comment from dragonpoet
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This shows how much you love them and they love each other. You must be really worried with all that has gone on in England recently. You are lucky.

I agree that all this terrorism is senseless killing and I pray that this will end soon.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
    thxs so much for stopping by and for your wonderful comments good thing there are a lot of different ways to communicate with someone overseas. If it were still phone lines I imagine they would be jammed up

    lulube
    lulube
reply by dragonpoet on 17-Jun-2017
    No problem. Skype must make it easier.

    dp
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. Even when our children are grown and married with their own lives we still worry about them when they might be in danger. Hold on to hope and faith, they will keep safe.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
    thxs so much for your wonderful comments and compassion. they moved into more country type villages but are only 15 mins. from the Queens home in Windsor.

    lulube
Comment from TAB_that's me
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Too many tragedies in England lately. You wrote a beautiful tribute. Yes, each country is crying rivers of tears for their losses.

teresa

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
    thxs Teresa for your great comments. What is happening to people, are they coming up short in the genetics or something, like missing emotion hormones, if there are any? The younger generations, even into the 50's are all thieves and manipulators. ME ME ME and look what I've done for you. |makes me sick

    lulube
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hi Lulube, very well written and a relevant message for these troubled times. But try to understand that, like me, your daughter is not living in fear. Having said that, I would not like to live or work in London at the present time. Things are not going well. It seems that one disaster just follows another - four in three months. I'm sure your daughter and husband are feeling fine. A good poem Lulube - best I've read of yours. Dorothy xx

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
    WOW Dorothy, such a great comment for being my best that you've read. Thxs so much and for the blinging stars. My daughter phones me to let me know she's okay, glad you are too.

    lulube
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Lulube

= This is so thought provoking.
= So much unrest and unneeded tears from tragedy--seems like every day.
= Beyond sad and mournful, no matter what country.

= How is your daughter and new hubby doing?? Have you seen them or they come to see you?
= Hope the move is calming down.

Cheers ... Jax (*<*)

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
    Jax, yes they were here in Feb. and there two year visa extension might not get used, they may come home in the fall. Things are up in the air still Thxs so much for these great comments and the blinging stars.
    take care

    lulube
Comment from C.C Williams
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I really like the flow of the poem.

It has an interesting but difficult storyline attached to it. For a while now, I've been wondering what WW3 will be like. Explosions? Weapons? Blood?

Anyhow, your poem was enjoyable to read. Keep writing!

-CC

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
    Thxs so much for your great comments, glad you enjoyed the read

    lulube
Comment from country ranch writer
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While the upper crust live all prim and proper far from the ruins down below. People could care less and make it known.But for those that care need to show their support for all who have been injured. One day it may be one of theirs that were not spared and then where do they go,who do they turn to for for the help they badly need.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
    You can say that again, Barb. Im glad my kids are not too close to the big cities any more. thxs for your great comments

    lulube
Comment from Mustang Patty
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I think all of us can share your sentiments about our FanStory family living in England. One can only imagine what it must feel like to be so close to the horror going on in their country. I find myself praying for them every time I turn on the TV. I'm always scared there will be more bad news,

~patty~

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
    Yes it is a bit more to worry about when you have family and friends over there. thxs for your time and review

    lulube
Comment from lalajovanoski
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Hello there I really enjoyed reading this piece I found it to be very moving and full of good imagery and I like the adjectives and verbs that you use it really describes the picture in my mind thank you very much for sharing this God bless you

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
    thxs for your great comments and glad you liked it

    lulube