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Lovers

Passion

15 total reviews 
Comment from rjuselius
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this is a beautiful rictameter dear anonymous! the passion is so vivid that it explodes on the screen. (hehe, no pun intended)..
thanks for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
    Your kind compliments are much appreciated.. I'm just glad that the poem pleased readers. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Comment from estory
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I liked how this poem opens out of itself and then closes back into itself, like a flower. Its a great image for love, physical love, where we have this brief connection with someone else that overwhelms us for a moment, but then there is that inevitable pulling away as the act is over and we retreat back into our separate selves. I think opening and closing with 'feelings' is well chosen. lots of writhing wrestling action in the middle captures the moment. estory

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
    When I saw the style of poetry , the subject of love jumped out at me.! I am so glad you enjoyed reading it. I appreciate your compliments, and your kind review
Comment from Sis Cat
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This is a well crafted rictameter on the passion between lovers. Your descriptions of their love maker is creative and sensual without being pornographic or explicit. The repetition of the first two lines with the last two creates a balance.

Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
    I am so glad the poem's impression was sensual. The style of the rictometer spurred my inspiration. I am honored that you read and reviewed my pennning. Thank you so much.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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What a great love poem. There is nothing better than young love when it's fresh and new, except for mature love that finds it's basis in more that youthful passion

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
    Thomas, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the complimentary review.
Comment from Ronni
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Wow....a passion poem this is indeed! Your sensually succinct sensations and
evolutions of lovers is seductively sensational and totally enthralling. Great
pic too...thanks for sharing....best of luck in contest... Ronni

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
    Ronni, Thank you for a wonderful, alliteration packed, complimentary review.. I am thrilled you enjoyed it.
    Happy Tuesday, Trisha
Comment from Janet Foor
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A lovely romantic and passionate rictameter love poem filled with emotion.

Is that a passion flower you used. If so, wow. Very nicely done.

Blessings and good luck in the contest.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
    Yes, it is a beautiful Passion flower. I found it on FAR. Thank you for a great review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from lalajovanoski
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I enjoyed reading this poem I find it to be an excellent contest entry it has a good flow through well and good content thank you very much for sharing this God bless

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
    Lala, hi, nice to 'meet you' I am so glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for reviewing and great rating.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This rictometer about lovers is set up correctly and seems to take us through a tumble with a couple of energetic lovemakers. It taken take long so I guess there's room for improvement (in the lovemaking) (Humor).

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
    BIll, Do you mean it DIDNT take long? ("taken take long")
    Heck, I only had a few syllables to use !!!!!!!! LOL Thanks for your light hearted review.
reply by Bill Schott on 12-Jun-2017
    'didn't take long' That makes more sense.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
    I 'got it'
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Your count and flow are perfect according to a rictameter form.
Nicely stated two lovers sharing closeness and feelings letting emotions flow

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
    My river's dammed up. LOL. I value your reviews, thanks so much
Comment from marybell1
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I enjoyed reading your Rictameter poem "Lovers". You told a passionate story and had the correct number of lines and syllables for this genre.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
    Thanks for your review Marybell, I'm glad you enjoyed 'Lovers'
reply by marybell1 on 13-Jun-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.