Renga (Barren tree limbs break)
by Dean Kuch, Hitcher, and Gypsy Blue Rose41 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
This collective effort shows how great minds think alike, but not in an identical fashion. Each of you made a valuable contribution, and each of you needs the others.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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This collective effort shows how great minds think alike, but not in an identical fashion. Each of you made a valuable contribution, and each of you needs the others.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. We appreciate that you took the time to read our renga.
Gypsy
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written my friends so much emotion through the poem from the tears in the opening to the sounds of laughter in the closing I loved this shows the quality of all of you as writers regards Jill
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This is very well written my friends so much emotion through the poem from the tears in the opening to the sounds of laughter in the closing I loved this shows the quality of all of you as writers regards Jill
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the six stars, the review, and the kind words. We appreciate that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy :)
Comment from bookishfabler
I honestly have no idea how you poets keep up with all these forms and what not. It is amazing. I barely understand Haiku and Acrostic, now all these other forms. It sounds pretty. Thanks for sharing
hugs Heidi
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I honestly have no idea how you poets keep up with all these forms and what not. It is amazing. I barely understand Haiku and Acrostic, now all these other forms. It sounds pretty. Thanks for sharing
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words. We appreciate that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy :)
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, although unfamiliar with the poetry's form, I can easily say, to me it is beautiful and artfully presented - fluid in style and movement and lyrical in storied verse. The image and music further complements the beauty of the writing...
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In my opinion, although unfamiliar with the poetry's form, I can easily say, to me it is beautiful and artfully presented - fluid in style and movement and lyrical in storied verse. The image and music further complements the beauty of the writing...
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words. We appreciate that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy :)
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You are indeed welcome, Gypsy, all of you...Eve
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Collaborative renga - I really like this style - one learns something new every day --- cleverly thoughtout and so well presented, albeit so melancholy ---
Thank you for sharing this, Gypsy - a real pleasure to read.
Margaret
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Collaborative renga - I really like this style - one learns something new every day --- cleverly thoughtout and so well presented, albeit so melancholy ---
Thank you for sharing this, Gypsy - a real pleasure to read.
Margaret
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words. We appreciate that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy :)
Comment from MizKat
Hi Hitcher, Gypsy, and Dean.
It's nice that the three of you wrote this wonderful poem together.
I was happy to read it. I really enjoyed what your poem was all about too.
Kat
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Hi Hitcher, Gypsy, and Dean.
It's nice that the three of you wrote this wonderful poem together.
I was happy to read it. I really enjoyed what your poem was all about too.
Kat
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words. We appreciate that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy :)
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I loved reading what the three of you had written. Kat
Comment from Bill Schott
This renga, Barren Tree Limbs Break, reminds me of when I had students make these in class. We used a wiki site so they could do their piece wherever they were.
My understanding about the haiku portion was that poets competed to see who would get to start the renga. The losers simply threw their entries away. Finally, some scribe gathered them together and made them a stand-alone form.
I guess this hasn't addressed YOUR work here. I know that you are all especially talented, gifted really. This is additional proof of that.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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This renga, Barren Tree Limbs Break, reminds me of when I had students make these in class. We used a wiki site so they could do their piece wherever they were.
My understanding about the haiku portion was that poets competed to see who would get to start the renga. The losers simply threw their entries away. Finally, some scribe gathered them together and made them a stand-alone form.
I guess this hasn't addressed YOUR work here. I know that you are all especially talented, gifted really. This is additional proof of that.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words. We appreciate that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy :)
Comment from Leena
Wow! I'm spellbound! Kudos to your collaborated effort; everything seems to be in perfect sync. Getting introduced to Renga for the first time and happy it was through this poetry of yours. An absolutely thrilling read. The background score and the image too is totally fascinating! Keep it up! Regards.
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Wow! I'm spellbound! Kudos to your collaborated effort; everything seems to be in perfect sync. Getting introduced to Renga for the first time and happy it was through this poetry of yours. An absolutely thrilling read. The background score and the image too is totally fascinating! Keep it up! Regards.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the six stars, the review, and the kind words. We appreciate that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Renga with great teamwork much can be accomplished. It tells a great story as a whole in three parts. Part one is excellent and I belief the other parts will also excellent.
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A very well-written Renga with great teamwork much can be accomplished. It tells a great story as a whole in three parts. Part one is excellent and I belief the other parts will also excellent.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words. We appreciate that you took the time to read it.
Gypsy :)
Comment from apky
As always I marvel at your genius in this, especially when more than one writer is involved.
The pic is great, but the way she's holding that sword? I hope it doesn't depict an intent to commit suppuku or something.
Cheers,
Apky
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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As always I marvel at your genius in this, especially when more than one writer is involved.
The pic is great, but the way she's holding that sword? I hope it doesn't depict an intent to commit suppuku or something.
Cheers,
Apky
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words. We appreciate that you took the time to read it. It's just a picture.
Gypsy :)
