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I Dare You!

Don't mess with Lefty.

5 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Don. I missed this one. Good job. You can't go wrong when writing about babies. Their expressions are priceless and everybody loves them. Congrats for your win in this contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    Yep. When necessary, a baby is always something one can fall back on.
    Thanks, Marilyn.
    Don
Comment from lyenochka
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That's such a precious picture. The poem does seem to describe that intense expression on the baby. I guess he's playing some raucous video game. Good rhyming even in such a little poem.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    Thanks for the comments, Helen, but that kid's out for blood. Didn't you notice that clenched fist? :o)
Comment from Leena
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Good one :) I believe the little one in the picture is Lefty. Dare someone crosses him; his expression says it all! Wonderful and amusing poetry. Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    Yes, that sure is Lefty, with his power fist clenched for action.. Thanks for the compliments, Leena!
Comment from moonsunrise
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This is a very cute and funny poem. I really like the imagery selection you chose. Look at Lefty's eyes! Very lighthearted and humorous.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your compliments, Moonsunrise.
    I'm so pleased you enjoyed my little poem.
    Don (aka Ogden).
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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Wow! That baby looks mean, but I know he's probably adorable.
You've written a funny piece.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count: 3-5-3
'I Dare You!' meets the requirements of the contest and makes a good entry.
The image shown supports the poem. The background selected goes well with the photo and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    No, he is a mean baby. Thank you for your excellent review, Nicole
    Don.