Serenity
Thoughts on a quiet evening44 total reviews
Comment from ronnie k
Amen, life's journey can but hard and ruff, but with faith our life, in prayer and thanksgiving can and will be "......will be complete in Your eternity" thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Amen, life's journey can but hard and ruff, but with faith our life, in prayer and thanksgiving can and will be "......will be complete in Your eternity" thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you ronnie for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Irish Rain
Amen, for we are but pilgrims, and strangers in this land, to enjoy it, spread His love, for a time...then journey home. This is a lovely entry, blessings...
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Amen, for we are but pilgrims, and strangers in this land, to enjoy it, spread His love, for a time...then journey home. This is a lovely entry, blessings...
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Thal1959
This is a very effective poem. It starts with the darkness of one's spiritual nature that seeks fulfillment in the light. It is beautifully expressed with the dark/light and day/night metaphors. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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This is a very effective poem. It starts with the darkness of one's spiritual nature that seeks fulfillment in the light. It is beautifully expressed with the dark/light and day/night metaphors. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
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You're welcome - it is always a pleasure, Janet.
Comment from Patricia A. Shaw
I enjoyed the presentation made here. It was very spiritual but calming. The selection of the photo was colorful and appropriate for the subject and the words in the poem. It was breathtaking to see the water lit up and to read the words that accompanied them. A hidden bird is always a winner. And lastly it was peaceful.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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I enjoyed the presentation made here. It was very spiritual but calming. The selection of the photo was colorful and appropriate for the subject and the words in the poem. It was breathtaking to see the water lit up and to read the words that accompanied them. A hidden bird is always a winner. And lastly it was peaceful.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nancyrabbrose
My pilgrimage will be complete in your eternity. I like that line because I can interpret it two ways: it might be about my lover and me or about God and I, or, perhaps about nature as the lover. Well done. Beautiful imagery.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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My pilgrimage will be complete in your eternity. I like that line because I can interpret it two ways: it might be about my lover and me or about God and I, or, perhaps about nature as the lover. Well done. Beautiful imagery.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you Nancy for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A soothing spiritual poem with serene tranquility and calm connotations. I loved the line: 'the heaven's Milky Way smiled on the earth below', a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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A soothing spiritual poem with serene tranquility and calm connotations. I loved the line: 'the heaven's Milky Way smiled on the earth below', a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you Dolly for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nice poem, Anonymous Author, and a wonderfully well composed poetic proclamation portraying one's spirituality.
The rhyming was on the money, as was the message this conveys.
Even when we feel alone we're never truly alone.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Nice poem, Anonymous Author, and a wonderfully well composed poetic proclamation portraying one's spirituality.
The rhyming was on the money, as was the message this conveys.
Even when we feel alone we're never truly alone.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you Dean for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
I came in 2nd to a lovely poem by MissMerri.
Blessings
Janet
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Excellent, Janet!
Great job!
You're more than welcome.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
this is an excellent poem. Your rhymes are spot one and the meter couldn't be better. It is very easy to read. It will probably win the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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this is an excellent poem. Your rhymes are spot one and the meter couldn't be better. It is very easy to read. It will probably win the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you Thomas for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
This one came in 2nd to a lovely poem by MissMerri.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from LaRosa
what a nice entry for a spiritual prompt!
just a side thought: I can barely remember being able to see the Milky Way. Seems a
thing of childhood times before the city became too big....just a
memory, but thanks for it.
The Voice, 'made my soul rejoice'.
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'My pilgrimmage will be complete in your eternity.'
I know I think in terms of eternity and God; but it could also be a song
of love eternal for a person...
Very expressive and imagery laden work. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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what a nice entry for a spiritual prompt!
just a side thought: I can barely remember being able to see the Milky Way. Seems a
thing of childhood times before the city became too big....just a
memory, but thanks for it.
The Voice, 'made my soul rejoice'.
and
'My pilgrimmage will be complete in your eternity.'
I know I think in terms of eternity and God; but it could also be a song
of love eternal for a person...
Very expressive and imagery laden work. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from LIJ Red
The first stanza calls to mind The Lord walking in the cool of the evening in the garden where Adam and Eve were hiding after chomping that apple...this looks to prompt and an excellent entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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The first stanza calls to mind The Lord walking in the cool of the evening in the garden where Adam and Eve were hiding after chomping that apple...this looks to prompt and an excellent entry for the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you LIJ for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
