Briarly Hall
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Sir William's love rival."Historical fiction
3 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
It took a 2-3 readings to get the gist of this one. Aha! But now I've got it. I learned a new word, too, "redingote." A good story that I enjoyed reading. This could be the start of something longer. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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It took a 2-3 readings to get the gist of this one. Aha! But now I've got it. I learned a new word, too, "redingote." A good story that I enjoyed reading. This could be the start of something longer. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Most encouraging review zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Here in like a musical note, a high pitch sound and break in melody of the musical love at heart broke the concordance of love in rivalry induction in the pitch; hot-sweet; I liked.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Here in like a musical note, a high pitch sound and break in melody of the musical love at heart broke the concordance of love in rivalry induction in the pitch; hot-sweet; I liked.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a technically sound write, but to be honest, there isn't an actual story here. I have read what came before but it would have better to have written something in entirety for the competition. This feels like what it is - part of something else.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
This is a technically sound write, but to be honest, there isn't an actual story here. I have read what came before but it would have better to have written something in entirety for the competition. This feels like what it is - part of something else.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
