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Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, I wish I could be so certain that he'll get his comeuppance.
Seems to me, that's the sort of fairy tale we tell children.
It strikes me that real life doesn't always
employ such checks and balances.
But your poem is clear, well-written, and intriguing.
I don't think I have much of a talent for writing
to visual prompts. I admire you for it.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Ah, I wish I could be so certain that he'll get his comeuppance.
Seems to me, that's the sort of fairy tale we tell children.
It strikes me that real life doesn't always
employ such checks and balances.
But your poem is clear, well-written, and intriguing.
I don't think I have much of a talent for writing
to visual prompts. I admire you for it.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Nine times out of Ten, they don't. You're right, they are the ones that always get away with it, but we can't tell the children that! As for not being able to write to a visual prompt, I think you'd be incredible at it. You have an imagination to die for. Thanks for the lovely 6 stars, my dear friend and the compliment! Biggest ever hugs. xxxx Sandra
Comment from oliver818
I like your poem. There must be an interesting story behind it. It seems someone got very bad treatment here. Thanks for sharing and have a really great day
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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I like your poem. There must be an interesting story behind it. It seems someone got very bad treatment here. Thanks for sharing and have a really great day
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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There always is a story behind a story, my friend! Thank you so much for your lovely review. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks of the state and status of deceiving and effect and outcome of deceivers and views that deceivers cannot defeat the honest and the true; I liked.
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This speaks of the state and status of deceiving and effect and outcome of deceivers and views that deceivers cannot defeat the honest and the true; I liked.
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Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Thank you, my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. :) Sandra xx
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
Most excellent Sandra. Rhyme and meter perfection, and the movement from discovery to revenge expectation is smooth as silk. Nice read with my morning coffee. I worked with the same guy once. - Wendy
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Most excellent Sandra. Rhyme and meter perfection, and the movement from discovery to revenge expectation is smooth as silk. Nice read with my morning coffee. I worked with the same guy once. - Wendy
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Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Thank you, Wendy. Another catch-up! So pleased you liked it. :) Sandra xx
