Picture This
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Deceivers"poems from Picture This Challenge
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Comment from l.raven
HI Sandra, I truly believe that what goes around ....comes around...and you have to answer for what you do...very well written sweet girl...I love your poem...and what a picture...you did a great job...love ya you...Linda xxoo
worked all day in the house...trying to clean everything...and get the ceilings painted...sigh...but it doesn't leave me a lot of time on FanStory...love xxoo
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
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HI Sandra, I truly believe that what goes around ....comes around...and you have to answer for what you do...very well written sweet girl...I love your poem...and what a picture...you did a great job...love ya you...Linda xxoo
worked all day in the house...trying to clean everything...and get the ceilings painted...sigh...but it doesn't leave me a lot of time on FanStory...love xxoo
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
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I'm with you on that, Linda, if it's not in this lifetime, it will certainly be in the next. We all have to answer for what we do. Thank you, my dear friend, for taking the time to read this one. I know how busy you are, God certainly blessed me when He sent me you. Biggest hugs and sooo much love. :) Sandra xxxx
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your sooooooo welcome sweet angel...and God blessed me with yoir friendship...biggerest hugs and love back at ya...have a wonderful day...love xxoo
Comment from write hand blue
Hi Sandra. You tell the story of a man who deceives a boss to gain promotion. A story vey well told in poetic form. Pleasing to read and as we know this happens in real life. A good accompaniment to the picture... ~Mel~
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
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Hi Sandra. You tell the story of a man who deceives a boss to gain promotion. A story vey well told in poetic form. Pleasing to read and as we know this happens in real life. A good accompaniment to the picture... ~Mel~
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much, Mel, for coming and reading my poem. Unfortunately, it happens more than we realise. Awful, isn't it? Thanks again, my friend. :) sandra xxx
Comment from rwilliam
Bravo! You painted a great picture with this piece.
I loved the dance of your words as we moved around the scene. We danced a graceful waltz along with this couple and found satisfaction with the reasoning of his demise.
I'm honored to be reading your writing.
Congratulations on the awards. You earned them! :-)
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Bravo! You painted a great picture with this piece.
I loved the dance of your words as we moved around the scene. We danced a graceful waltz along with this couple and found satisfaction with the reasoning of his demise.
I'm honored to be reading your writing.
Congratulations on the awards. You earned them! :-)
Comment Written 01-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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You are amazing! Thank you so very much!! This is such a great review and the compliment you have paid me today will stay with me always. Thank you! Bless you! :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
She'll catch him out, without a doubt, she knows that come what may--
those strings he'd tugged and left her mugged, will strangle him one day.
For those who cheat, cannot defeat the honest and the true,
they'll tumble down and lose the crown as all deceivers do.'
Wonderful rhyme and rhythm to this, so eloquently written, well done this is astonishingly good. Kindest regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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She'll catch him out, without a doubt, she knows that come what may--
those strings he'd tugged and left her mugged, will strangle him one day.
For those who cheat, cannot defeat the honest and the true,
they'll tumble down and lose the crown as all deceivers do.'
Wonderful rhyme and rhythm to this, so eloquently written, well done this is astonishingly good. Kindest regards Meia :)
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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That is such a wonderful compliment, Meia, thank you so much! You've made my day. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from XGoneX
Hello,
Very introspective poem about betrayal and lack of principles in order achieve a promotion. You showed well that karma will always get them.
Particularly liked:
For those who cheat, cannot defeat the honest and the true,
they'll tumble down and lose the crown as all deceivers do.
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Hello,
Very introspective poem about betrayal and lack of principles in order achieve a promotion. You showed well that karma will always get them.
Particularly liked:
For those who cheat, cannot defeat the honest and the true,
they'll tumble down and lose the crown as all deceivers do.
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Thank you, IAM, for your lovely comments on my poem! :) Sandra xx
Comment from Thesis
Very creative interpretation of the photo. I did not get that perspective from the picture, but your words built a good argument for what you portrayed. Deception is a good subject, especially when it relates to someone stealing an idea and calling it their own.
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Very creative interpretation of the photo. I did not get that perspective from the picture, but your words built a good argument for what you portrayed. Deception is a good subject, especially when it relates to someone stealing an idea and calling it their own.
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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I will look out for your poem. The one thing I really like about the Picture This challengers is all the different takes we have on the pictures. It shows how our minds wander in various directions. Thank you for your review on mine, Thesis. :) Sandra x
Comment from frogbook
Great job with this one. I wrote one and did not post yet so you are a good reminder here. I will have to see what date I put it for. Excellent story of this dishonest sort.
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Great job with this one. I wrote one and did not post yet so you are a good reminder here. I will have to see what date I put it for. Excellent story of this dishonest sort.
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Thank you again, my friend, for another great review. I look forward to reading yours! :) Sandra xx
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and interpretation of the 'picture this' challenge. It happens frequently that one steal the other's ideas in the corporate the thief gets the honor and the one who should get the honors have to stand back without proof.
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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A very well-written poem and interpretation of the 'picture this' challenge. It happens frequently that one steal the other's ideas in the corporate the thief gets the honor and the one who should get the honors have to stand back without proof.
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Thank you, Sandra, for reading and reviewing my poem. I have had a few people tell me how it happened to them. People who do that are thieves. To steal and idea, is just as bad as stealing an object. I'm pleased you liked my poem, my friend. :) sandra xx
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend their is nothing to be gained from lies and deceit really just unhappiness all around trying to keep up with the act well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Oh yes my friend their is nothing to be gained from lies and deceit really just unhappiness all around trying to keep up with the act well done regards Jill
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Thank you, my dear friend, for another lovely review. You are so right, but not everyone thinks that way, especially those who do it to you. Big hugs! :) Sandra xx
Comment from dragonpoet
This must happen often with this guy. He must not have many friends. Such people always get their comeuppance.
This poem has a smooth meter and the rhyme is easy and unforced.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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This must happen often with this guy. He must not have many friends. Such people always get their comeuppance.
This poem has a smooth meter and the rhyme is easy and unforced.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, my friend. I'm glad you liked it. :) sandra xx
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You are so very welcome.
Joan
